Reviews for No Longer Alone |
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dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 6/25/2019 Interesting chapter and plot and idea |
Me And Not You 1001 chapter 2 . 6/6/2019 Usually, I don't leave reviews. I know, I know, I'm a terrible person. Anyway, I was just reading about your oxymoron and stuff and I was struck with something... You're not dumb. And your profile page said you were a guy. This may sound a little mean and very stereotypical, but I was under the impression all guys were dumb and uneducated. Hold off before you get offended though. I have a reason for my assumption. All my brothers (and I have a lot of them...like 10) are kind of on the more egotistical, "a woman's job is in the kitchen," sort of guys. So, sometimes (it's bad I know) I find myself surprised at intelligent males. You are though...or at least your writing is. (I think there's a difference because my writing makes me sound way smarter than I actually am.) And I just wanted to tell you so...if you ever read this ( I sometimes get the impression that fanfic writers don't always read their reviews, maybe that's just me). |
Madeline Leicht chapter 17 . 4/11/2019 Gaara! Naruto isn’t a moron! He’s just dotty! Or maybe flighty! No focus, too much energy, but he’s proven that he’s smart enough to learn complicated dangerous jutsu in no time flat! Plus, he does really well on the fly and most of his pranks work out meaning he’s sneaky enough to not get caught until they’re done!he’s just not analytical. |
Monster King chapter 39 . 4/9/2019 Great job |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/19/2019 Hah! Gai. I love Kakashi, but honestly, I just hate him when he's being so.. ugh to Gai. Some people can reach higher levels through practice and effort, and that's what counts. |
TheOddOneIsHere chapter 39 . 2/1/2019 UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE |
TheOddOneIsHere chapter 36 . 2/1/2019 Fuuuuuck... why did you do that... |
TheOddOneIsHere chapter 35 . 2/1/2019 I like this turn of events. |
TheOddOneIsHere chapter 32 . 2/1/2019 ... and that, Yashamaru, is where you die. |
samaritan17 chapter 11 . 1/21/2019 Realistically, a village would never give up their Bijuu and Konoha would never give up "the last Uchiha". This is a fanfiction though, so it's an interesting idea and I'm curious to see how it turns out. |
TheOddOneIsHere chapter 13 . 10/23/2018 The second legendary trio, A.K.A, the next Sannin. |
TheOddOneIsHere chapter 1 . 10/23/2018 idk. who is it |
moodysavage chapter 39 . 5/29/2018 Loved your story and I'm so glad you were able to end it with a bit of a wrap up. I know where the storyline goes next and I know where the characters stand. The rest can be left to my imagination |
moodysavage chapter 12 . 5/27/2018 I really liked your poem... and it was nice that Sasuke switched in small part because he noticed Naturo had made a friend. But I'm pretty sure Naruto and Gaara were 9 when they met so Gaara couldn't have graduated from the academy at 7. |
Robot Sparky chapter 12 . 4/8/2018 Love the poem, it was easily the highlight of my day. Also I didn't realize it was a poem at first (I only found because of the A/N), I thought it was a song... A really, really, REALLY good song, I read three times before I continued on with the chapter. |