Reviews for No Longer Alone |
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jjjan1125 chapter 16 . 3/18/2018 I'm pretty sure this chapter was written before minatos identity was revealed, right? |
Dango and Tea chapter 7 . 2/25/2018 A Hinata-biased fic. Pft. But kudos to the grammar. |
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 39 . 1/10/2018 Even though I would have liked a more solidified ending, I kind of like the open-endedness of the last chapter. It kind of leads you to believe that they will be able to find a solution and complete their mission. Great job! I really enjoyed reading this fanfic! |
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 21 . 1/8/2018 I don't normally review in the middle of the story, but I must say, I LOVE SASSY HAKU! He's sooo adorable! ...*awkward cough* ... Now then...On with the story! |
YokaiAngel chapter 39 . 11/26/2017 superb!~~~~~~~~~ |
Guest chapter 12 . 10/25/2017 The title of this chapter it's reminded me of my science exam that's on tomorrow. I should be studying for it but Fanfiction is just so much more fun |
Anonymous Person chapter 39 . 5/14/2017 Holy hell, that is a absolutely terrifying 5 person group. |
Anonymous Person chapter 37 . 5/14/2017 I'm just left wondering how so much tension managed to arise over that. |
Anonymous Person chapter 35 . 5/14/2017 Well, that happened. Not sure what else to say. Ah yes, does Orochimaru even have a part in this? |
Anonymous Person chapter 34 . 5/14/2017 Damn, gotta give it to Hiashi. He's got a way with words that literally banked no argument from the questioner. |
Anonymous Person chapter 33 . 5/14/2017 I know I'm looking forward to a different take on the chunin exams. As it is, the exams are probably the most commonly written arc from the series and it makes reading them quite tedious. The most prominent examples of it being different would either be the time travel fics where the canon Team 7 retains the knowledge/abilities of their grown up selves or the scenario the fic "True Potential" offered. With emphasis on different characters making the exams much more interesting to read. |
Anonymous Person chapter 31 . 5/13/2017 I've read some pretty interesting/plausible methods of escaping Gaara's sand techniques. The one I remember best had something to do with sending sound waves through the sand causing it to lose it's shape and power. After all, it is just sand. |
Anonymous Person chapter 13 . 5/12/2017 Personally I think the best and most concrete example of how being in Konoha has helped Gaara greatly is in how he reacted to the people talking about Naruto. I'm pretty damn sure that if that had happened in the sand, no doubt the two people would be dead. |
Anonymous Person chapter 9 . 5/12/2017 I've always figured that the person with the worst/most believable backstory was Gaara. I kinda looked at it as 1 an example of what happens to someone when they literally grow up thinking/believing their a monster and 2 as a rule to to not judge a book by its cover. Don't care what others say you can learn plenty from watching anime. You simply need to actually think about what you're watching. |
111segasonic chapter 39 . 3/28/2017 Such a good story. |