Reviews for Step
Firefox1000 chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
I wish you'd continued this :)
AccioTimeTurner chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
So cute! :)
Coco-Minu chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
Luna's last line of this was wonderful.
wendy 90210 chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
FINISH THIS STORY MAKE MORE LUNA/DRACO STORIES TOO
Lord 0f Storms chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
short, but definitely sweet

Luna's just adorable, and they are both so in character in this.. i can actually visualise this happening! wonderful :)
Kore-of-Myth chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Oh I enjoyed this! Good job! You Luna's character down perfectly - something that can be quite tricky at times.

Keep Writing!
KyootNShort chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
HAHA! Oh man. That caught me offguard. Luna's so adorable. .
Scratches chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Win! i adore it, now i just want to see what happens! Oh my. I do hope you do write mor Luna/Draco in the future.
Steph chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Really nice. I love a Draco/Luna when its done right. Good job. I really liked it.
VeelaChic chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
Luna blinked, "I like you. But I can guarantee you that I won't swallow your leg."

Hehehehe...witty
denise134 chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
that was good
E.D. Ejrcito de Dumbledore chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
I like it very much this one shot, it's original and funny. How you think on this? Its so real. Let us join another history, please. ñ_ñ
Friendsofweasley chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
Hehe...Leg swallowing,eh?...Well,I simply adore this one-shot...
BellonaBellatrix chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
'Luna blinked, "I like you. But I can guarantee you that I won't swallow your leg."'

...Classic. More Luna-like than most :) Good job.
felix-hortensio chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
Nice. They're both in-character, which is excellent. And I much like the idea of Luna being friends with a step.

Minor quibble: "Madam Pince goes her way in trying to silence mouths" - this is a really awkward construction.
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