Ngl i hated HG pairing and i still think it should have been H Hr pairing in canon. So the sister bro relationship still makes me upset

brother and sister psh

While its all well and good to contemplate a mature Ron Weasley, isn't that sort of like contemplating a talking dog? Outside remotely possible, sure, true, but likely, not so much. I do agree some time, someday, Ron will eventually mature, but it will be another one of your marathons not the startlingly quick process I've been reading through. But hey, it's your story, go on...enlighten us all.

Wonderful story. Looking forward to a sequel.

Keep writing as life allows

Where's endgame? Iv looked and can't find it. This story is awesome

Great story. I don't usually read Harry/Ginny but this one is really good. I don't even care about the ship anymore. I love your Harry! He's intelligent, brave, and sensitive. Love it all. Thanks for sharing.

Great premise and seems like the Order will at least be competent to a point!

I enjoyed the way you’ve written the various relationships in this story, the best being Hermione/Harry of course. Their interactions were written so very well. The individual characterisations were wonderful too. Harry and Hermione grew in confidence, and Ron started maturing a bit. I’m not very hopeful about Ron, Ginny and Molly taking kindly to Hermione’s continued closeness with Harry though, despite the circumstances. And I kind of didn’t understand why Harry brought up the book when he did. Then there’s Hermione, who’s realised her feelings a little too late. The story is poised in a way where things could go in any direction. Intriguing. Off to the sequel to see how it all pans out. Thanks.

Another disappointing chapter in that it reinforces your Harry's unsuitability and lack of competence to attempt to kill Tommyboy, at the same time it demonstrates weak-as-water Harry's complete lack of self-awareness. For the love of Magic, don't allow him to pass on any of his genes.

It's obvious this Harry is not the Chosen One. Much too weak and outclassed by a weakling like Snape. Very revealing chapter. Even Krum did better than your Harry. It's time for this Harry to face reality and retire from the battlefield before he jeopardizes the anti-Voldemort force by his supreme incompetence. Thank Magic this surfaced now when a remedy is still possible. To quote Mrs. Slocombe, 'Weak as water, weak as water'.

*shudder* I know you wrote this ages ago, but the ending line alluding to that previous scene between Hermione and Ginny (iirc) made me shiver in realising how Hermione intended to deny herself.

Absolutely great read all around, and a rather refreshing take on the final book of the HP series even after having read dozens and dozens of other fics, and with the hindsight of the actual final book.

- Hermione couldn't have picked up the 'revolver' . Is was stated earlier to be a .45 Automatic pistol , which is definitely not a 'revolver'.

This is my 3rd time reading this fiction so don't know why I never noticed this before but- a revolver does not have a clip. in one sentence you state Harry went through 2 clips and puts the gun down then you have Hermione pick up the REVOLVER- can't have it both ways :-)

The only problem that I have with this chapter is that almost every aspect of the sword, both in canon and most fanfics, is the fact that the sword would have taken the basilisk venom to make it stronger and cutting anyone would typically cause poisoning by that venom... But it’s also very common for Harry to still have both the venom and the Phoenix tears in his system/magic, making him all but immune...

Feeld so forceful