|Reviews for Soul Searching|
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/18/2013
I don't mind it, I guess, but it seems you're trying to satisfy both HHR and HG fans. I wish you would stick to one or the other.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
I'm just laughing... I have a Core 2 Duo, Windows 8, ADSL and Broadband.
| 1997-infinity chapter 26 . 4/18/2013
Loved it! This is your best story! :D
| Mr Norrell chapter 4 . 4/10/2013
As a relative late-comer to your work, having read only "Best Mates" and up on your list of stories, I decided to go back and try this one. I must say that you've... definitely improved since this story. The character interactions become much less forced and stilted as your writing style has evolved. Going from your most recent, "Tales From 6th Year: Revelations in the Potions Classroom", to this one is like watching a child trying to bang and force one of those horse-shoe blacksmith puzzles into working. Have you ever thought about revising some of these?
| Hurin3 chapter 25 . 4/8/2013
I've read all your other stories multiple times, and have enjoyed them all. I guess I have avoided this one and its sequel because I'm not terribly fond of Ginny. Or at least the nonentity in canon.
Or maybe I was just saving it for a rainy day.
I'm starting the sequel now.
| Pathseekerme chapter 22 . 4/1/2013
You NEVER did say what the nicknames were, either... who knows, we might have had fun with it, too!
| Pathseekerme chapter 21 . 4/1/2013
I really, really like your story! In addition, my grown-up daughter and I have both suffered through a traumatic experience of the same sort (one of us in marriage, the other outside of it, both in wildly differing areas of the United States) and there is NO way that a traumatic event doesn't leave a mark of some kind! My daughter doesn't sit with her back to doors and doesn't allow people other than myself to touch her without warning, for instance. The nightmares are a particularly realistic and well-done touch - great job!
| TheLadyJaye chapter 25 . 3/2/2013
I can't wait to move on to the 2nd story, but just two things.
Vial is the spelling you were looking for, vile means disgusting.
Also, why was Harry wearing glasses if he had the laser surgery?
| Telepek chapter 25 . 1/9/2013
You know when i read this story with every chapter i was getting more annoyed and pissed of what i was reading. And then the ending came and Thank God it's getting interesting.
I was interested, how can you describe Harry/Hermione relationship without getting into a romance with them. But the problem is that with every chapter you are beginning to describe them as the perfect couple. They are feeling good together, they are finishing each other sentences, they are spending an awesome time together, they are the perfect fic couple. And yet we have Ginny and seeing, how you described H/Hr relationship the only thing that i can think of that the relationship with Ginny would be good is that they have to date. Ron says they have to, Mrs Weasley says that they have to. With what you accomplished with the Harmony relationship Ginny feeled riddiculously forced, and a unnecessary part of the story. And i understand the concept of Harry having two women in his life, but you gave too much time to one character, and reduced too much of the other, that for me it would be an obcious choice who to choose.
| jimbobagins chapter 26 . 1/7/2013
frustratingly good !, intentions spot on Professor... A tad late to review ?
| texan-muggle chapter 25 . 10/2/2012
I finally read this story. I think I have been avoiding it because I am mentally heavily invested in a more romantic H/Hr pairing...or if not romantic, at least fairly exclusive (see some of robst's work for examples). But I finally bit the bullet, and of course this story was at your normal standard, which is excellent.
Moving on to "End Game"
| texan-muggle chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
Finally getting around to reading this one...
Minor math hit...you should have 150,000 galleons being held in the names of Bellatrix and Draco (you said Bella got 100,000 galleons, and since she doesn't have any kids to split with, she would be due the entire amount).
| LWJ2 chapter 8 . 9/18/2012
Great story, I'm enjoying this.
Something I noticed in this chapter, you first refer to a .45 automatic, then (last paragraph) "and she picked up the revolver".
Whilst there were .45 revolvers used as issue weapons in the U.S. forces, that was in World War I. The pistol in general use now (and at the time in this novel) is the Beretta 92, in 9mm Parabellum (aka 9x19mm; 9mm NATO). Some special forces units use a .45 pistol.
Additionally, the British forces went from the .455 Webley revolver to the Browning Hi-Power in 9mm Parabellum, which I is still in use by them, although I believe they are slowly changing to the SIG 226, also in 9mm Parabellum.
Thanks for writing and sharing this story.
| Hawkins chapter 15 . 8/25/2012
a goblin made weapon absorbs any qualities that make it stronger. Gryffindor's sword has basilisk venom. Harry's cut would have killed him.
| becuzitswrong chapter 25 . 7/30/2012
Fantastic ending. Reading the sequal next.