well I kinda want to stop reading after finding out the other champions die

there is no way lina could die to a horn tail one shes blown up bigger draggons and 2 she's a red headed woman they cant be beat

to be honest the bleeps were cute the first few chapters now their annoying

Colorblind Hyuuga's? I like that idea. Would it be cool for me to borrow that idea for my own fics?
-Maelstrom
P.S. Loving the fic so far.

I agree little Goku made me laugh. And I totally agree anything after is Almost total crap .

Kakashi brutal that fucker was to lazy to train anything at the beginning the only time he did any serious training is when shit was about to hit the fan

Yea, me again *eyeroll*
If you're still looking for chakra/magic theory, I can be of some help, as I already had a discussion about it with my little sister years ago... I could be of assistance with canon Itachi Issue as well
You already got my contact so I won't repeat myself
Ciao, Arlene Daeva

Here you are-Oji

I am firmly repressing all memories of the ages of the participants in this fic, especially Harry's. He is definitely not 11. I can assure you of that.
Anyway, otherwise its well written if lewd. thankee for your time and effort, I know it was all for me.
Toodleloo.

Okay, I really REALLY like that, the idea that Harry had spent so much time TRYING (and failing) to get his name in there, that everyone believes him that he didn't.

Hey, peacocks are evil feathered bastards. Don't let their ornate colours trick you, they'll as soon eat your face as look at you.

Heh, this Harry WOULD have an appreciation for what Rita can do.

I have to say, the casual homophobia is disappointing. I hope that you've changed since then - I put a lot of stuff in my writing, when I was younger, that I no longer support - but yeah.

Huh, that colourblindness would actually make a good deal of sense...

Man, it's so weird reading stuff from before major canon revelations came out.

I'm done with the fic. I have tolerated enough of Harry's "charms". He is as loud and obnoxious as the retarded canon Naruto, which is saying something. Furthermore, his inexplicable obsession with Ginny would no doubt mark him as a pedophile (one with seriously bad taste nonetheless) had he been an adult.

I don't mind swearing, but with 'BLEEP' composing a significant share of his spoken words, it ust marks him as a redneck with no imagination. Furthermore, with how much of an asshole he is to Anko, I don't know why she hasn't butchered him yet. I certainly would have. And finally, by being more brain damaged than canon Sasuke, someone please put this rabid dog out of its misery.