|Reviews for Fine, Fine Line|
| Doomthatimpends chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
wo...blast from the slashy past...
| a2zmom chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
This was a very interesting idea and I liked how it played out. However, you need a good beta.
Patients are people that doctors' see. You meant the word patience. There are other spelling and grammar errors that a beta would help you to clean up. Plus, some of your word choices could be improved to help punch up the story a bit more.
I do think you have some real talent and definite insight into the characters.