|Reviews for Torment|
| GoblinBat chapter 12 . 5/30/2011
Wow, once more I am in awe of one of your stories, twelve chapters is simple not enough! Again this is so well written, elegant with out being overly wordy and the insight into each character is wonderful. I must say write more! Honestly I hope you do!
| little.tel chapter 12 . 1/26/2011
I really like this story. It's very interesting and has some nice plot twists. I want to know how it ends, so I'm going to put it on alert just in case it ever gets updated. _
| Shinigami Hollow chapter 12 . 1/7/2011
I love this story, I hope you continue it again sometime soon. Please? I'm not too proud to beg you know? Also, is it too much to ask for a happy ending? Though I suppose that depends on what one's definition of happy for this story is...of course my version of happy is Hannibal/Drake yummy sex times with maybe some love thrown in...with maybe vampire Hannibal King and vampire Zoe-Zoe...not trying to tell you how to write your story, just consider it a suggestion maybe? :)
I just love happy endings. Though my definition of happy is different than most in this case I suppose.
I do hope you continue this story though, as I love it so and there is so little Hannibal/Drake to speak of...
Thank you for writing it.
| mw chapter 12 . 1/4/2011
this is awesome
| Eloise chapter 12 . 12/22/2010
Still alive? Hope so. The story's too good to let die. Happy Christmas!
| Ellechillin chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I like the conversation a lot more...
| Libby chapter 12 . 10/28/2010
| HellzCrusader chapter 12 . 10/5/2010
interesting. i like how this is progressing, i hope that you update it, it is really truly awesome i think. :) it's hard to find a good king fic, and this is one of the best i've read i must say. Fantastic job :)
| laffertyluver23 chapter 12 . 4/24/2010
I'm so in love with this! I just read all 12 chapters in one sitting and now i'm sad there's no more to read! Please tell me you haven't abandoned this, and are planning to write more?
| Sarah chapter 12 . 3/16/2010
I didn't realize you had updated! Thank you! I love this story and hope you write more. Please?
| Amaranth01 chapter 10 . 12/12/2009
Whoa. This story rocked! I am glued to each chapter due to its awesomeness.
| Doomthatimpends chapter 12 . 12/7/2009
goddamn this story floats my boat
| Nicki chapter 12 . 12/4/2009
this is great, and i'm glad u updated :D
| evenstar413 chapter 12 . 11/27/2009
I cannot believe my eyes, it is an update! You really have no idea how excited I am. I have been follow this fic from the beginning till now.
Great chapter! The subtle balance between Drake, King and Zoe finally broked. And for King, his mental condition seen like a disaster, hope it won't keep going down and down. Very curious about Vampire!Zoe, will she act a little bit different with everything? After all, this was her choice to become the thing she hate, right?
BTW, the last chapter, Drake's reaction made me wonder about. Maybe deep down, he has the desire to keep her with him.
Anyway, please keep writing!please don't let us waiting too long for this wonderful story!
| lelann37 chapter 12 . 11/23/2009
holy hell. amazing story! I've really enjoyed it so far. thanks for sharing