Reviews for Every Teardrops Fall
snacgirl chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
Just discovered this today. Nicely done, although as "kittenmommy" mentioned there are some things that need fine-tuning before I'd rave over it. Personally, the tense change didn't bother me nearly as much as the inconsistent punctuation. That's a pet peeve of mine. Lots of potential, tho, and it's clear you have a love for your subject. I'll be looking for more from you.
Kittenmommy chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Wow... very intense! Glad to see another "Prophecy" fic - they're so rare! A couple of minor things could be fixed - punctuation, tense changes, etc. Otherwise, wonderful fic! I love how you diverged a bit from how the scene played out in the movie... I could just see Gabriel licking up Thomas's tears. Bravo!
Lee chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
Always good to see a 'Prophecy' story on. Good work.