Reviews for Fun on Ice
Musa Rox chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
this as very funny!

But it DID have a bit of an abrupt ending...

And did you mean to have Fai call him Kurogane at the end? I just noticed that, nya

I LOVE iceskating! *leap, twirl*
Muffinizer chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
But but... I feel so BAD for Kuro-wanko... -sniffs- The poor guy can't ice skate for his life...

Anyway, funny, rather cute. Mokona can tease him quite a lot now, can he? xD Fai should've like, jumped to the rescue, saving him from falling! [Has like, totally become a Fagane [Yes, I made that up right now] fan. Not good.] ANYWAY! Awesome one-shot, still very cute. Aja aja Kuro-wanwan! :D

-Muffinizer
Jakkaru chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Poor Kurorin! But thanks for writing this, it's really funny. . You should add an ending to it, since it just leaves the reader, "hanging," there.
Nefelpitou chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
That was SO funny! I love how Fai is always calling Kurogane some wierd some-thing or other, I think you keept them in character real well.
ShyMoonlight chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
yes, yes, YES! This was so funny. I relly liked the way you did Kurogane's action, is really funny! I loved it! XD
Fengtianshi chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Just so cute and lovely! It would be wonderful to see it!
MysticFirefly chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
It was cute, nice job with Fai's names for Kurogane. Sweet.
Shimmering tear chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
This was super cute! So kawaii! So adorable!