Reviews for Mistakes in the Dark
Zacharooshuriken chapter 2 . 5/27/2007
please finish
omgxRIKUxyay chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
c'mon i really like this story so update please!
moonlightning3 chapter 2 . 7/17/2006
I really like it, but you need to update.
paris chapter 2 . 4/11/2006
need more chapters. this sounds really good.
bear chapter 2 . 3/15/2006
that was great,i can'twait for the next chapter.
Komo Pineconeseed chapter 2 . 12/20/2005
How interesting! Update soon, please!
Captain Lila chapter 2 . 11/1/2005
interesting story..why would seto be sad? hm...so many questions...update soon
Landi McClellan chapter 2 . 10/30/2005
ARGH! The suspense is killing me. Not really since I think she is pregnant, and with Kaiba's baby. But still, can't wait til the next chapter.
iluvcarnell4eva chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
plz keep going,by the way i thought it was good
Jade Wyvern chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
It's not bad for a plotline but I just find it out of character.

For one, Kaiba's a bit too caught up in his work to be out drinking.

Two, Serenity's mom wouldn't act like that. She's actually a good person. She only feels guilty around Joey since she chose Serenity over him in those long years when Serenity and Joey had to be seperated.

There are a few grammatical and spelling errors but, other than that, this chapter that you have so far isn't bad.

It is part of a story, no? Or is it a one-shot? Hmm, I suppose I'll have to find out if you ever update.

Oh, and just so you know, I think Serenity's about thirteen years old and Kaiba about eighteen years old (he's sixteen in the Japanese anime though I think).

But, nevetheless, like I had mentioned earlier, the plotline is quite interesting-in a good way. It's just that I haven't read anything quite like this just yet and, thus, it's new to me. I'll be waiting for an update to see where this story goes.

Until then,

Alley Cat