Reviews for Topaz
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Very nice, keep writing
deleted111 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
I think you write well, but i don't like the way that you portray Cho, because it she just wouldn't be glad that cedric was dead, even if she was going to break up with him.
miiamya chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
that was sweet and sad. we always wonder what cho is thinking through the fifth book but jkr never goes in to it. well, i loved this.
Kyuriko chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
This is a very interesting take on Cho and how she feels about Cedric Diggory. I like how you portrayed her, as a popular girl, to go out with a guy for a certain amount of time and then breakup. It's interesting - her final words in this fanfiction don't seem to be out of love, but out of guilt, and I like how you used guilt as the purpose of her feelings rather than love. Nice job explaining some of the 'confused feelings' she may have had as well after Cedric's death.
diggoryfreak5545 chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
it was o.k. but only ok because cho didn't like ced back and i don't no a girl who don't like him.( besides slytherins)


the newfie girl
James Jago chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
An interesting study of an often overlooked character.

(And see my profile on a scenario in which she might feel a little better about the whole thing!)