Reviews for The Terran Jedi |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Decided to reread this story again and realize how much I wished it update. Sure I like the spin off stories you got but I still wished the main story continue it updates. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliffhangers are ok, but you had to go and bring in to this fanfic captain jack harkness aka the immortal dumbass who fucks anybody regardless of race, gender, and age. who also disregards all laws and logic just because he wants to still have fun but, in reality he's not supposed to because he's 1, a government employee who is a time traveler and a known associate of the doctor. 2, he can not tell anyone who is not in the know about who he is, what he is and why he's doing it. 3, despite his loyalties to both his teammates and torchwood itself, he constantly tries to find the right way to solve a problem that involves aliens the supernatural and his past and the doctor's allies. 4, due to the reason that torchwood was founded by queen victoria, jack and Unit oftentimes had to explain the doctor's complicated timeline to both queen elizabeth's and torchwood. 5, he can't just keep it in his pants. |
![]() ![]() I've thoroughly enjoyed this series! downloaded it onto my kindle and have been reading it back to back. very fun, love everyone. i assume it's not going to be finished, but that's okay because it's been a treat. I really enjoy you took an idea and just RAN with it. awesomely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know the muse can move to Denver and take up rock climbing. No blame, none at all. If you could ever manage to get Buffy out of that room, or the padawans into it that would be great. This is my favorite story on ffn. Especially good is your Dawn, she's a treat. thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() Hogwarts School of Prayers and Miracles is a troll/crack fanfiction. It is MEANT for the laughs. This "Grace Ann" lady doesnt exist. She/he is just an internet troll. They are trolling wonderfully and have clearly succeeded in their job since a lot of people like you are apparently fooled. It is just A TROLL FIC and it’s meant for the laughs. It’s meant to highlight the stupidity and cult mentality of some extreme people. No, it’s not mocking Christianity or feminism and no it’s not encouraging the stupid things said in this fic that are CLEARLY meant for the laughs. Tom Riddle’s perspective clearly displays it in the end. Just read the last chapter again and pay attention to what "Voldemort" is actually saying. The author is using him as their Author Avatar. I can see that you have written your own stories and you are quite successful writer on this site. But perhaps you should also learn how to read? And not get triggered over silly fanfiction? Tbh it just makes you look like a toddler throwing a tantrum. I guess you may be able to write really good stories but you still need help with your bad reading comprehension. Or maybe its just so, so easy to feel morally superior in front of a silly troll fic . Either way, the fact that you didn't know that you were just feeding an internet troll, is just pathetic. |
![]() ![]() Even more crossovers? And the fact that the other force users also have lightsaber doesn't make sense given the original setup. Special ls resistant swords maybe, but notightsabers, as they didn't have the necessary tech knowledge dumped into them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Scribbler, love the fic, I was just rereading this for the nth time, always worth it, when I noticed the engine speed is way off. 1000km/h isnt even mach 1 and you need to be doing mach 33 or 44000 kph just to leave atmosphere. Light speed is a million times the speed of sound or mach 1000000. a speed of 123500 kph would be mach 100 or .01% the speed of light and much more likely for a space fighter. Also in chap 28 Xander complains the x208 has too many engines and should only have one but now he is adding 4. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Arrrgh! Cliffhanger ending? Oh man, this sucks :( Not the story itself though, 'cause that was one of the best crossover stories I've read on FFnet. And so many of them, there were several dozen obliquely referenced (and those were just the ones I caught). Despite that your story weaves them together for a stronger thread rather than fraying from so many overlaps. If you have no plans to continue this and don't mind me asking, could you shoot me a PM with some of the stuff you had planned? There's so many plot points on the boil, never knowing would be mildly maddening. On the other hand if you do plan to one day return to this then breathe not a word to me, I'd far rather wait and see a story than get a bunch of cliff-notes. Thanks for the excellent read and the time and effort you've put into it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished re-reading this story. I hope that you will revisit it some day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been three years since you last updated? Dear God, I think I'd have read it anyway even if I had noticed that first, anyway. I'm thoroughly hacked off that there isn't more, and desperately hoping you've been working on it. Please? |
![]() ![]() "So - The Terran Jedi is back. My writer's block is broken. I will update more often, I promise." Liar! ::smirk:: Just finished reading through these two stories, and a bunch of the smaller side-stories, and just wanted to say thank you for a very enjoyable read, even if it did end rather abruptly more than three years ago! People move on, and it seems to happen to everybody eventually, but it doesn't change the fact that you left behind a really enjoyable read that has given me a fair amount of pleasure. Again, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Spikes gains a soul and Buffy loses one? Hope souls can regenerate from being eaten |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who is JK here? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sincerely hope that you haven’t given up on this fic yet. I know you’re on a Game of Thrones high still but please come back to this one or the others soon! We’re dying here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had so much fun reading your series! I loved the character voices, the plot, and I couldn't stop reading once I started. Thanks for sharing your story! |