|Reviews for I Will Stand Alone Against The World|
| darkrunner chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Nice touch, bringing back the scene when she gets trapped in her mind.
It was a cute fic. You wrote Mai very well. It was a standard Joey x Mai meeting up after Doma plot, and there's nothing wrong with that. Story-wise, it was pretty solid.
Watch for spelling/grammar mistakes. The first paragraph could have been separated when she turns off at Domino. I saw a few missed commas, a couple misspelled words, and "to" instead of "two"-"I love you to much". And the other mistake that other person mentioned.
Also, I was kind of confused as to how Joey got into the car. Did he jump onto the back of a truck and then jump into her car? What kind of truck was it? Was her car stopped and he finally caught up with it? Or are we not supposed to know how he got into the car? I wasn't sure how to read that part.
Overall, it was a good fic. Work on the spelling, and you should be fine. I look forward to stories from you in the future!
| anonymous Jewel chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Aw...I loved it! It's nice to see that there are still some great Jou/Mai fics out there! - Sending you a smile!
| counting by midnights chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
"light of te summer sun." typo! lol
other than that tiny thing, that was was great :P