Reviews for World Come Undone
Cammy chapter 2 . 11/27/2005
I can't wait to see what happens next! You have to update soon!
Busanda chapter 2 . 11/16/2005
I've added this story to my Alerts list. I think you have a fantastic start, and I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Fred God of chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
It is very much Spiffy and an interesting way that things could have turned out. Altogether worthy of much better worded praise. Hope you write lots more soon.
GalaxyPink chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
Ah so Luke's stepfamily was killed. Hm... so now Obi-wan has to raise him!
DarthGladiator45 chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
An excellent beginning, I especially like the description of the emotional conflict that Obi-Wan is experiencing.
Bob chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
Awesome! Keeping writimg, this is really good. I love the way you portray Obi-Wan. You are an excellent author.
Nautica7mk chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
Being inside the mind of Obi-Wan is heartbreaking. You've crafted a great two chapters. I'm looking forward to the next update. I wonder if you'll allow Obi-Wan to raise Luke until he's older.
GalaxyPink chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Charred bodies? Hmm.. well Luke's aunt and uncle died in episode 4, so maybe baby luke and obi-wan went to the future?
Flaming Gun chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
Wow...just wow...that was great! please keep going oh mighty awesome one.
doowop chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
:O Very intruiging-I'm interested to see what happens next!

You write baby Luke adorably, by the way.
Fred God of chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Good story, i'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out. hope you keep writing
Tgir chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Oh, I love the wist! Carry on?
SVCrystalGreen chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Wonderful start! Definitely intrigued! Please continue.

~JEM~
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