|Reviews for World Come Undone|
| Cammy chapter 2 . 11/27/2005
I can't wait to see what happens next! You have to update soon!
| Busanda chapter 2 . 11/16/2005
I've added this story to my Alerts list. I think you have a fantastic start, and I can't wait to see where you go with this.
| Fred God of chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
It is very much Spiffy and an interesting way that things could have turned out. Altogether worthy of much better worded praise. Hope you write lots more soon.
| GalaxyPink chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
Ah so Luke's stepfamily was killed. Hm... so now Obi-wan has to raise him!
| DarthGladiator45 chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
An excellent beginning, I especially like the description of the emotional conflict that Obi-Wan is experiencing.
| Bob chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
Awesome! Keeping writimg, this is really good. I love the way you portray Obi-Wan. You are an excellent author.
| Nautica7mk chapter 2 . 11/8/2005
Being inside the mind of Obi-Wan is heartbreaking. You've crafted a great two chapters. I'm looking forward to the next update. I wonder if you'll allow Obi-Wan to raise Luke until he's older.
| GalaxyPink chapter 1 . 11/3/2005
Charred bodies? Hmm.. well Luke's aunt and uncle died in episode 4, so maybe baby luke and obi-wan went to the future?
| Flaming Gun chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
Wow...just wow...that was great! please keep going oh mighty awesome one.
| doowop chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
:O Very intruiging-I'm interested to see what happens next!
You write baby Luke adorably, by the way.
| Fred God of chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Good story, i'm looking forward to seeing how it turns out. hope you keep writing
| Tgir chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Oh, I love the wist! Carry on?
| SVCrystalGreen chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
Wonderful start! Definitely intrigued! Please continue.