|Reviews for World Come Undone|
| SherazadeVader chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
What a great story! Thank you for sharing with us such a wonderful piece, I look forward to more...please.
| ally127 chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
Oh, how I love it when Luke calls Obi-Wan "Daddy".
| mlgm chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
What a wonderful, warm treat on such a cold morning. Love seeing Vader/Anakin gradually growing up, and starting to take control of his life back.
And Obi-Wan's determination to do things better with Luke is heartbreaking.
One little, typo perhaps: "destroyed what little he had managed to find in his and had turned it to darkness." Should there be a word after "to find in his"? Life, perhaps?
Marvelous chapter. Will be waiting for more.
| Hilary chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
I'm really, really enjoying this story! It's so sweet! PLEASE continue it! UPDATE SOON!
| Redleef chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
That red leader part was cute. Merry Christmas and thank you for the update.
| swiftykenobi chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
Oh Force, this is one amazing story! I loved every chapter and look forward so much to reading more! This is some awsome writing, and you are a great storyteller. Wow!
| destroying tokyo chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
Awesome. Perfect. I love it.
| riverwater chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
Wow, that was excellent. I really like it and can't wait for an update.
| kateydidnt chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
fantastic story so far! I really like it. Ilove the introspection from both Vader and Obi-Wan. Luke is so cute!
| Quillian chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
Hm... interesting fic. I just found this, and I really like it already. Please update soon! :)
| Kenobifan chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
A wonderful chapter! I enjoyed reading it very much. Wow! I wonder what is going to happen next? Please update soon! :)
| ice-connoisseur chapter 5 . 12/21/2005
Yeynes, an update! A brilliant chapter! Update soon!
may the force be with you!
| ally127 chapter 4 . 12/8/2005
I love this fic! squee! all the characters are in-character, the plot is creative and magnificant, and Obi-Wan being called "Daddy"... luv it! I'm excited for the next update!
| DarthGladiator45 chapter 4 . 12/7/2005
Good story. I'm enjoying reading this, but when Luke finds out that Obi-Wan really isn't his father, he will probably feel betrayed.
| Just Me chapter 4 . 12/7/2005
Wow. I like it a lot! Write more? Please?