Reviews for World Come Undone
Book girl fan chapter 15 . 9/15/2013
So, he won't hurt Obi-Wan, but he still thinks he's only here to kill him? Honestly, Anakin, face reality. You still care about Obi-Wan, and you don't really want to kill him. You'd prefer to die first.
Book girl fan chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Two small problems that I'd like to bring to your attention.

'As though he and Anakin were being watched. Reaching out through the Force, Obi-Wan could sense nothing beyond the usual wildlife that inhabited the surrounding forest.'

I'm pretty sure that should be Luke, not Anakin.

'If Obi-Wan was going to pretend to be the boy's shoulder'

I'm just as sure that 'shoulder' should really be 'father'.

Really enjoying the story!
miarath chapter 24 . 6/27/2013
Wow! This is just wonderful.
Such wonderful depth.
MK chapter 18 . 6/1/2013
Love the timing of the progress of the plot and the characterisation is spot-on! Good job! Bravo :D
Lovell Luka chapter 24 . 5/1/2013
Update plaese! *wags tail and pouts*

if you love me, you'll update. and sooon! very very soon. XD
Lovell Luka chapter 23 . 5/1/2013
haha. luke and leia are so cute. hope all goes well for ani and obi. sorry. my reviews are getting more crappier (bad grammar intended). LOL.
Lovell Luka chapter 22 . 5/1/2013
YAY! Clever Obi-Wan! Homing beacons and Organa! Brilliant.
I started crying at:

"I never wanted to fight you, Anakin. You were closer to me than any other soul I've ever known—in many ways you still are.
Lovell Luka chapter 21 . 5/1/2013
uh-oh... *pulls out lightsaber and kills Tarkin* There. All better! XD
Lovell Luka chapter 20 . 5/1/2013
i almost wanna cry. im hoping that luke brings anakin fully back from the dark side.
Lovell Luka chapter 19 . 5/1/2013
Weird... no information on the Emperor's death? That gives me chills. It's so creepy.
Lovell Luka chapter 18 . 5/1/2013
Aw! Children are so wise and innocent.
Lovell Luka chapter 17 . 5/1/2013
oooh... next chapter... Lol.
Lovell Luka chapter 16 . 5/1/2013
2 years?! Really?! Whoa. That makes me sad... I gues your entusiasm fizzled out? :(
Well. It was a good chapter. *nod nod*
Lovell Luka chapter 15 . 5/1/2013
Heehee. I just love it when Qui shows up! w
Lovell Luka chapter 14 . 5/1/2013
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWW! That's so wonderful!
*squeals and cries with overwhelming joy*
Fantastic as always, my old friend. 8D *glomps you*
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