|Reviews for World Come Undone|
| Book girl fan chapter 15 . 9/15/2013
So, he won't hurt Obi-Wan, but he still thinks he's only here to kill him? Honestly, Anakin, face reality. You still care about Obi-Wan, and you don't really want to kill him. You'd prefer to die first.
| Book girl fan chapter 7 . 9/15/2013
Two small problems that I'd like to bring to your attention.
'As though he and Anakin were being watched. Reaching out through the Force, Obi-Wan could sense nothing beyond the usual wildlife that inhabited the surrounding forest.'
I'm pretty sure that should be Luke, not Anakin.
'If Obi-Wan was going to pretend to be the boy's shoulder'
I'm just as sure that 'shoulder' should really be 'father'.
Really enjoying the story!
| miarath chapter 24 . 6/27/2013
Wow! This is just wonderful.
Such wonderful depth.
| MK chapter 18 . 6/1/2013
Love the timing of the progress of the plot and the characterisation is spot-on! Good job! Bravo :D
| Lovell Luka chapter 24 . 5/1/2013
Update plaese! *wags tail and pouts*
if you love me, you'll update. and sooon! very very soon. XD
| Lovell Luka chapter 23 . 5/1/2013
haha. luke and leia are so cute. hope all goes well for ani and obi. sorry. my reviews are getting more crappier (bad grammar intended). LOL.
| Lovell Luka chapter 22 . 5/1/2013
YAY! Clever Obi-Wan! Homing beacons and Organa! Brilliant.
I started crying at:
"I never wanted to fight you, Anakin. You were closer to me than any other soul I've ever known—in many ways you still are.
| Lovell Luka chapter 21 . 5/1/2013
uh-oh... *pulls out lightsaber and kills Tarkin* There. All better! XD
| Lovell Luka chapter 20 . 5/1/2013
i almost wanna cry. im hoping that luke brings anakin fully back from the dark side.
| Lovell Luka chapter 19 . 5/1/2013
Weird... no information on the Emperor's death? That gives me chills. It's so creepy.
| Lovell Luka chapter 18 . 5/1/2013
Aw! Children are so wise and innocent.
| Lovell Luka chapter 17 . 5/1/2013
oooh... next chapter... Lol.
| Lovell Luka chapter 16 . 5/1/2013
2 years?! Really?! Whoa. That makes me sad... I gues your entusiasm fizzled out? :(
Well. It was a good chapter. *nod nod*
| Lovell Luka chapter 15 . 5/1/2013
Heehee. I just love it when Qui shows up! w
| Lovell Luka chapter 14 . 5/1/2013
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWW! That's so wonderful!
*squeals and cries with overwhelming joy*
Fantastic as always, my old friend. 8D *glomps you*