haha whats so funny chapter 2 . 8/16/2008
cool i love the series
Sunny Duck chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Nice work! You did Yatchan really well! Your portrayal of Rushuna was pretty good too!

Keep Smiling!
Zeek72 chapter 2 . 12/18/2006
Very nice. To bad you didn't do one on mikan.
Fiona Fairhame chapter 2 . 4/20/2006
Well, everything's spelled correctly. _ I always like to start with something positive. This honestly isn't much of a story. It's more like a summary of the first episode. Wish I could make some suggestions on what to improve... other than just scrapping it and starting over. Does not show any creativity...
golden-eyedwolf842 chapter 2 . 12/28/2005
A little short, but hey, a grenadier fic is a grenadier fic. At least, you wrote one! Anyways, I thought that this fic was quite good, so good job! Grenadier isn't very popular is it? :P


marli chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
What catergory was this story originally published under?

A month ago, it did not exist!
Cornuthaum chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
wotage! a grenadier fic... even tho not good by my standards, it is at least the start of Grenadier fandom here!

) go on, Grenadier needs promotion! XD