|Reviews for Survival|
| dah1507 chapter 7 . 4/26
| Hades' Neko chapter 8 . 8/14/2014
I understand I will wait for u to come back and write a chapter you think is worthy CIAO
| Cam Namakaze chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
i think u should hook him up with Tsunade
| tri-bladed scythe chapter 9 . 2/8/2010
hey man stoy is pretty good and i'd like to see it continued
ohh yeah my pairing is naru/tsu
| the-constructive-critic chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
“I’m more powerful than you will ever be, Uchiha boy.” Those were the first 9 words the boy had spoken in that clas besides answers, hello and his name; those 9 words also made him the most hated person in the class."
It's ten words, without the conjugation it's eleven. But hey we all make mistakes every now and then.
| OHYA chapter 2 . 4/6/2008
Alright dude, nothin' has changed...
The fic is still borderline because of how nondiscript you make the scenes. I recomend that if you're using microsoft word, right click on a word and go to synonyms and change the basic word into a more discriptive word. If you're not using word, then well, I can't help ya'.
If you did change the way you make scenes after the second chapter, then, well, fan-fuckin-tastic. Heres a cookie.
Also, you might want to consider changing the way people "poof" out of existance. The word "poof" is connected to the previous or next word in the selection (forgot which...). You might also want to use quotes in order to make the shunshin jutsu less confusing (when the characters poof if you didn't know what the shunshin was)...
The good news is that the grammer (aside from a few minor errors) is above average (mostly). I think that this fic has much potential that it is not quite unlocking, but keep working at it and develope your own personal writing style.
| OHYA chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
ya well, YOU SON OF A BITCH YOU STOLE MY FUCKIN' FIC NAME!
or did I steal yours...O.o
Ya for the first chapter it was alright, not extremely entertaining or whatever but not many errors and overall it's good enough.
I will read chapter two and see if it's interesting enough to keep reading; I will most likely review again regardless.
| Racing the Sunrise chapter 9 . 3/19/2008
Will you still work on this story? I read it all in one day and love the whole thing. But, I really don't understand how people can imagine Naruto and Tsunade together? It just doesn't sound right.(to me, but I don't really matter)
| ABitterPill chapter 7 . 2/20/2008
I must say I really enjoyed this story. It's not often I find a story that keeps me reading it so intently that I don't notice it's nearly sunrise and I still haven't slept yet. I was that immersed in it.
I hope that you continue it some day, I would love to read more and it really sucks when the great stories are left unfinished.
| GuyverZero chapter 9 . 1/8/2008
so far this is a great read looking foward to more if ya write them.
| thedarkeststar chapter 9 . 12/9/2007
yo hope u do end up finishing this story but hey if you dont make one just as good if not better
| creepingshadow chapter 9 . 12/1/2007
YOU HAVE to finish this story i enjoy reading a murderous naruto this is an excellent story and i don't give that compliment to any one
| firelordeg chapter 7 . 10/29/2007
this story is fantastic please update soon as for the paring i vote for Naruto/Tenten
| Raeigh chapter 3 . 10/15/2007
:P that was 10 words
| InARealPickle chapter 2 . 10/15/2007
LMAO Sakura choking and dying
I don't care for her in the manga but she's okay in some of the fanfics. Still, I can't see her and Naruto together. So w/e.
But I just have to ask... wtf were you people (you know who you are) thinking(or smoking) when you voted for a relationship between naruto and tsunada? She's like 60 years old!