|Reviews for Double X Chromosome|
| AniMEfanGirl101 chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
ah...Akito. You are so naive :)
| ReinSohma chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
This was quite amusing. Akito pratically freaking out because she believes she's dying and hatori trying to explain it all. hahaha. Nice one.
| MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Things I liked:
Great concept - I'm excited to see how this plays out
Good character voice
Wow Ha'ri's asexual? Lol
I love the emotion since it really does seem real
I like how Hatori's pretty uncomfortable addressing the situation - poor guy
Ways to improve:
You've added a few extra words in: later with in fetal
Things I didn't like:
I'd keep author notes away from the actual flow of the story
| Random Scribbles chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
So cute! I love akihari stories, and this one is rather adorable. I would totally freak out to if i didnt already know about it. And i love how Hari insults her there at the end with the toxic shock thing but she doesnt really care. Love it.
| TraitorTatara chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
You kept Akito in character pretty darn well,
And I never thought I'd be saying this, but, poor Akito!
God do periods suck...
| ilovekyosohma chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
it was good...but having your period really doesn't hurt. it only hurts if you get cramps or something, those are damned painful. but other than that, nada. whatever. i hink Akito was really well in character here. and i don't particularly like fanfics where akito is a by, as it goes against the true nature of the manga, so that was cool. anyway...later.
| Eclipse Bloodmoon chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
So, I definitely loved it. Akito having her first period! That's so amazing! I've always wondered how that might pan out. Also, her first bra... I guess I'll write that one. You're right- it hurts enough when you're healthy- not to mention if you've got a kidney infetion, the flu, bronchitis, or any other of a thousand diseases.
| Sevilla Baens chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Haha, this was hilarious.
| bajdhfdfkj chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
OMG! This was so hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing! XD
And what was that thing about Akito flirting...? It's too funny. Totally in character and original... D
Yep. Just like your "Growth" fiction, I am definitely favoriting! XD
| elliott ashes chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
I enjoyed this, you have a very interesting writing style. You're right, Akito certainly does insult a lot of things, but it was in character. It was funny how she just insults everything about being a girl, and then insults everything about being a guy. She really does have issues.
| Hmmm chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
| edge-of-reality chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
zomg I've always wondered what would happen at THAT time of the month. lmao! fantastic!
| CocoGirl chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
O.O;; BWAHAHAHA XD so funny!
| Hatori Ichihara chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
haha. i like this story i think akito might have those thoughts during her time.
| Koshi Sekisen chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Oh my god...! Poor, poor Akito! xDD The heck! This was soo hilarious! I don't think I've ever read a story like this before...
Really, really funny! Keep up the good work!