Some mild (and even amusing) homonym errors (a "horse" voice...heh!) aside, you have a major punctuation mark error issue.

At the ends of much of your dialogue you're missing all your punctuation marks. Everything including periods, commas, exclamation and question marks are missing. This is an example of your dialogue (although these particular sentences are not part of your story, it's just an example):

"Oh crap"
"What now"
"I forgot my glasses" Bob replied.
"They're on your face"

Here's how it looks with correct punctuation.

"Oh crap!"
"What now?"
"I forgot my glasses," Bob replied.
"They're on your face."

Each bit of dialogue needs punctuation at the end, INSIDE the quotation marks, otherwise everyone "sounds" like they're speaking in a flat monotone. Punctuation really isn't optional.

You either need to run this through a spellcheck or have someone proofread it before you post.

I realize that this hasn't been updated in fifteen years, but it still had to be said.

Just found this fix and whoa were to leave us all hanging for more I hope you return to finish and if not what a incredible read.

Great story. It is one of the best crossovers that I have read. I would hope that someday you will have the time to complete it.

Very nice story. Too bad it died just when it got really interesting...

You really need to finish this story line its to good for you to abandon.

How bad this is?
1. The Ancients had thousands of readily available galaxies in close vicinity, no need to go Universe hopping to find a place for a fresh start.
2. No, you complete idiot, the costellation seen in the sky don't have their stars located in a plane, quite the contrary - the difference in depth distance is at last an order of magnitude larger than their spacing.
3. The military gobbledigook in this chapter... sheesh, it's like the wet dream of fat nerd that ended up as a liberal arts graduate instead of a pilot as he dreamt as a kid.
This story is a trainwreck.

To bad you never finished this story line.

Yup, knew the ending would hurt.

I am so sad. The amount of decent BSG fics is very small, and even those use the "frack" misspelling. Then I find this beautiful long dead relic, and it makes me sad.

Eh, someone tries to kill you, you kill them right back.

finish it someday

Wow, i haven't read a shytier, messier story in a long time, no wonder it never got finished.
It's like a gore/ISIS video, you know it's disgusting but you can't stop watching it - or reading in this case.

Enjoyed it!
To bad you never finished it...

I would like to see this story finished as it is well written and engaging.

interesting story found this story by chance if you ever start this story back up ill be waiting