Good job bruv

It is amazing how much you got correct considering this was posted over a year before DH was published. Even where you guessed wrong, yours was an improvement. In some cases, the improvement was significant.

good

Tn

A waste of Time, writinh and reading this chapter. Whu three time travel including MoRon, he does not learn anything up to Now. So waste of Time and bad writing

Who or what was the dog?

A beautiful story, I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

So did Gryffindor's sword not keep the basilisk venom it was imbued with? Because if it did then Voldemort should be dead from the cut on his arm and Dan should also be dead because he cut his fingers.

I don't know if it'll end up being an issue, but thankfully the story is complete so I can read straight through, but before going over all their school years they probably should have secured the mirrors.

The dumbledore/sphynx scene was very well done, its rare to read about how badass he was capable of being

Why. Why do you people keep naming Hermione's parents Dan and Emma. Its not cute, its fucking dumb. When you name them Dan and Emma people visualize Dan and Emma as her parents, which is FUCKING DUMB

Very well written story so far, and by well written I mean no annoying tropes, so far!

this is a different story . Most fanfiction always pair Neville with Hannah, Susan, Tracy, or Luna.

A comeback for Harry to Ron at this point, would have been to remind Ron that he and his brothers certainly hadn't been concerned about their sister back in her first year.

I wonder why no fanfiction writer ever thought of telling either Dame Longbottom or reminding Neville that considering his talent in Herbology, his magic may have been just showing itself in the greenhouse?

A comeback for Harry to Ron at this point, would have been to remind Ron that he and his brothers certainly hadn't been concerned about their sister back in her first year.