Reviews for Harry Potter and the Three Travelers |
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![]() ![]() The dumbledore/sphynx scene was very well done, its rare to read about how badass he was capable of being |
![]() ![]() Why. Why do you people keep naming Hermione's parents Dan and Emma. Its not cute, its fucking dumb. When you name them Dan and Emma people visualize Dan and Emma as her parents, which is FUCKING DUMB |
![]() ![]() Very well written story so far, and by well written I mean no annoying tropes, so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a different story . Most fanfiction always pair Neville with Hannah, Susan, Tracy, or Luna. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A comeback for Harry to Ron at this point, would have been to remind Ron that he and his brothers certainly hadn't been concerned about their sister back in her first year. I wonder why no fanfiction writer ever thought of telling either Dame Longbottom or reminding Neville that considering his talent in Herbology, his magic may have been just showing itself in the greenhouse? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A comeback for Harry to Ron at this point, would have been to remind Ron that he and his brothers certainly hadn't been concerned about their sister back in her first year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The other alternative would be for Hedwig to fly Crookshanks in hi his carrier to the Grangers? But cats probably wouldn't appreciate being. "Owl posted" |
![]() ![]() ![]() god. good fic best friend |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really well written story…excellent balance of dialogue and exposition, great plot, many interesting ideas, truly ‘alternate’ universe (always nice when a writer switches up the horcruxes and their hiding spots a bit!), and just well written. Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lots of refreshing unique ideas in this story! I loved AW’s golden thread moment. And how is it that this is the only story I’ve read that addressed the real life happenings of 1997? Well done there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed reading your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, their first present as a couple. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typical behavior for Harry - Ron acts like an ass, and Harry leaves his own house to avoid upsetting him any farther. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the Hermione in chapter 1 is OOC, weak and whinging. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is a big, black dog on his parents grave? Is that just a coincidence? They didn’t even question it? It doesn’t make sense... |