Wonderful!

Excellent story. It was cute and romantic and funny in the right places and had enough action and chaos to keep me interested all the way through. Fantastic work and thank you for sharing this with the rest of us.

Wonderfully enjoyable story! I liked its original plot (I get tired of re-stirred canon) with lots of plot twists and turns.

Good good

So far I find this a very interesting twist in the story, and over all, it's pretty well written. I so have 2 little annoyances. 1. I don't find it believable at all that Ron would blame Harry for his mom's death, not even Ginny to be totally honest. I could see her letting something like that slip in the moment but it would be most because of grief and I think she would apologize pretty quick. Ron though? No, don't see that at all. I totally get the jealousy, and can totally see him reacting to their kissing like that, just not the whole blaming Harry for his mom's death.

2. Hermione, by the time he reaches this age, is way more chilled out on the whole being a nag thing. It's really annoying to me that she treats Harry like a child half the time, especially because it was mainly Ron she treated like that anyway. Only when Harry followed Ron's lead did she generally lay into Harry as well, and even then it generally only had to do with studying. Harry and Hermione at the core of their relationship are very understanding of one another, and they support each other through it all, there is a reason that they barely ever fight throughout the entire series. This Hermione nags sooooo to much! She nags and lectures and is elf crazed. Granted she is vocal in the books, but not to this extient. She lightens up a lot in the end area after her 4th year, here thiu, it just seems to be another thing to nag about.

hrmmm, Hermione comes across as a bit of a hysterical fluttery ninny so far, shrieking at everything and constantly clinging to Harry... not enjoying that.

I loved your story. Very well written

I really enjoyed this fic. Everything was pitch perfect. The story had me in its grip the whole time, and the changes you made to the Horcruxes were great. This is what the last book should have been.

Awesome job! I love everything about this story.

Great

Good Nice

Damn great story. I liked the changes and the story line. Great read thank you for sharing this

This was brilliant! I've just spent the last eleven hours devouring it. I loved it. Thank you for sharing with us!

Clever. Unbashful use of AU and characters and historical figures. Finally saw fidelis charm used with thought. Great balance with non human magic, new artifacts and jewelry. Like ending and pairings.

It all worked!

A truly impressive tale, thoroughly entertaining throughout.
Thanks so much for taking the time to share this with us all.
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