|Reviews for One Hundred Days|
| sunday chapter 10 . 3/5/2006
What A wonderful story! I likey.
| Wordsworth 13 chapter 10 . 2/25/2006
| Lord Yenma chapter 10 . 2/14/2006
That was a truly amazing and wonderful story that you wrote. It was extremely well written, with great usage of the first person perspective, allowing me to empathize with the character. One of the best stories I've ever read here.
| Guybrush007 chapter 2 . 2/7/2006
This is unbelievably awesome. Only on Chap 2, but man is it rock-out-loud awesome!
| LunaRyuu chapter 10 . 2/4/2006
I loved this story! It was so wonderful and I loved how it ended. I ned more Ordinary Story though! Can't wait till you update that _
| Crystal Jade chapter 10 . 2/1/2006
Great Story! Thanks For Writing It! Can't Wait To Read More By You!
| omnipotent otaku chapter 6 . 2/1/2006
I liked the POV switch. Good idea.
Ganondorf ruins everything, the loser. (I still love him though XD)
| omnipotent otaku chapter 5 . 1/31/2006
I haven't a clue why I didn't read this before! This chapter reduced my to a squealing, giggling pile of happy goo XD
I'll try to read the next chapter tomorrow!
| epilogue chapter 7 . 1/30/2006
You know, i think that Cascada's "Everytime we touch" song really fits with Zelda's POV
Anyways, great story, it's very emotion packed and complex, showing multiple characteristics, flaws, strengths, qualities, etc. Very beautiful.
| Sakurelle chapter 10 . 1/30/2006
Yay! that was a wonderful ending! loved it!
| CucumberPickles chapter 10 . 1/29/2006
It was nice. One of those romantic stories that aren't filled with overdone love scenes. I think I might've liked it better because of that(I'm not a very romantic person. I don't like it too much).
While reading it, for some strange reason, I kept on thinking how this story could connect to Ocrania of Time(mostly because that's practically the only game I have. Nintendo 64 is my only game console). For example, I thought that the little girl that was in the Temple later on becomes the Hero of Time's mother(call me crazy, I don't care). Maybe even great-great grandmother. Possibly because of the blue eyes. Obviously, this would be how the ocrania of time comes into possesion of the Royal Family.
There's a whole bunch of things that I thought up of while reading this, and that makes me glad. Not only because it was interesting, but because it was sheer proof that this fanfic made the mind go to work. In other words, it wasn't some fanfic that you just read with no real thoughts. It made you think. Or atleast it made me think. You can believe whichever.
| Greki chapter 10 . 1/29/2006
I must sincerely confess that this is one of the few pieces full of quality that I have read. You managed to play with emotions and make them real, as if you yourself had suffered from those anguishes, illusions and hopes. I even have to tell you that I was so absorbed by the story that I did not notice in the least a mistake of sorts. You've made a wonderful job, and I can't possibly imagine how could you perfect this piece better than it already is.
As for the one-shot challenge, umm... an interesting idea. Would you be able to write a piece of the adventures Zelda went through after she made "that" and went to get "it"? ('it' so as to not let out spoilers)
Well, with all of that said, I must apologize for taking too much time from you, and thanks for sharing this story with us. Also forgive me for not reviewing that much.
| SnowCrystal chapter 10 . 1/29/2006
Well, I loved the ending, it was so sweet! Though, I can't help but wonder if it was pretty rushed. I just settled down and read through the last chapters and I noticed quite a few spelling mistakes. I'm sure you wouldn't do these as there weren't that many in the beginning ir maybe it's just me reading through it all that once. But that's not important as spelling mistakes are easy to mend.
I think you should be taking your time with this. It was a beautiful story but it was slightly watered down since it seemed rushed. I expected the battle between Ganondorf and Link would to have lasted a bit longer. The switiching of POVs got a bit confusing at first but I settled down and I understood it once I had realized who was speaking. However, I think you should have avoided switching the POVs, even if they showed what the person was thinking, as it seemed slightly confusing. Maybe you should have just stayed with Link's POV. Though, that would have been difficult for the point where he's dead. But all in all, you handled the switches pretty well.
I'd like to say you have a great style of writing. You describe things without it getting boring but your long sentences sometimes drag along. Instead of separating most of your long sentences with commas, try a variety of short and long sentences.
About time, you shouldn't fell presurred to update so frequently. I saw that you updated OHD quite a few times before pausing for a while. That's what I did. You should take it easy and relax. Write a few times during the week and put it away if you have things to do. Of course, don't take months to update as someone's bound to notice. Don't rush things, or it'll look like a half-arsed chapter. You didn't do this but a few paragraphs seemed rushed.
I have to say I shouldn't be giving critism when my writing fails compared to yours, but you did ask for some XD. Like I said before, you write descriptively without it becoming tedious. I think I'll read Ordinary Story sometime :)
| EmpKaylenatye chapter 10 . 1/29/2006
I can't believe how entranced I was with your story. I loved every moment of the plot line. Wonderful writing!
| Hard-Luck-Joker chapter 10 . 1/29/2006
Man... I feel like cryn' now! This story was just too good! Loved it loved it loved it! I really did belive that they weren't going to stay together! Boy did you give me a scare so thank you for that I guess lol. Well I'll keep an eye out for your next story! I love all the ones you have wrote! I'm sitting here waiting for OS. I know you are probably tired of ppl telling you about it, but i can't help it mija! The story is too good! So anywho to end this last review for the story! I WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT STORY! Keep Up the GOOD WORK MIJA!