|Reviews for One Hundred Days|
| some person chapter 10 . 4/30/2014
Great story, keep up the good work
| allyssagrace16 chapter 10 . 4/29/2014
I read all of this in a matter of hours! Sooo amazing! One of the best stories I've read, and I'm impressed with the well planned plot twists and happy ending. Also very impressed that you squeezed it all in 10 chapters. Awesome work! Definitely a favorite of mine!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Like the last guy said, not sure if your reading this, but then again it doesn't really matter. I almost like the story, but most of the little details that make up the story bother me. I guess it's preference and thought, but things like the bow, magic, the hawk, retorts. I like the story in itself it's just a lot of the des all details that aren't really logical turn me off a bit.
On the bow fact, if anyone's reading; it is highly unlikely that the bow is 100 ft-lbs. That is actually a very high draw weight. Not to mention that Zelda is probably not using a body length bow, which would have a higher draw weight. She wouldn't be strong enough to pull it all of the way back and actually use it. I have a bow that's about my height and it's like 55 ft lb and that is plenty.
And one of those details is that you shouldn't be dry firing a bow like that, it can be like, really bad for the bow.
| RockaRoller88 chapter 10 . 4/11/2014
Since this story is so old (in terms of fanfiction) and I can't imagine that you are still reading new reviews that pop up, I wasn't planning on leaving a review. That changed when I read some of the older reviews, and saw people complaining about the tonal shift that occurs in chapter 6.
This might be my favorite Zelda fanfiction, and I'm saying that as someone that's never shipped Zelink. I loved the change in the story, I felt that it grounded Link and Zelda in the realities of what being a princess or knight is, and I felt that you never lost sight of the core of the two people we met on the hunting trip, despite the hells they both underwent. I was cheering for Link's daring rescue attempt, and for Zelda to overcome the mental damage done to her by the Gerudo. Your OCs were wonderful, your Zelda felt vibrant and alive, and your Link felt like a real person struggling with his humility and insecurities. If I had to nitpick, I would say that I didn't particularly like the Deus Ex Machina ending (mostly because I felt that the plot thread didn't really go anywhere) but this story was absolutely fantastic.
I just wanted to let you know that some of your readers appreciated the risky tonal shift you wrote into the story.
| Thinkbubbles101 chapter 10 . 3/4/2014
I CRIED! WHEN ZELDA CAME BACK,AND AND...
OMG IM SO HAPPY! THANK THE GODDESSES THAT U WENT ALL THAT TROUBLE,JUST FOR US TO READ! I HOPE THE GODDESSES SHOWER YOU WITH HOLY BLESSINGS!
THANK HYLIA FOR YOU, NOBLE AUTHOR, WAS TO BE CREATED ON THIS LAND WE CALL HOME.
| Thinkbubbles101 chapter 2 . 3/4/2014
I would have been laughing too Link!
Best story! Yaaaaaay
| Stormhelen chapter 10 . 2/17/2014
I loved your story!
It was really gripping, I found myself up late at night just keep reading, I fell in love with the story quickly.
My hart cried when Link died but then Zelda took his place.
You are just so good at writing!
| Wah chapter 10 . 12/4/2013
why do good stories have to end :(
| HyperOps chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
I seriously loved the first half of this story. I saw a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes etc. but the story was so good I didn't particularly care. I must admit however, that when the story became darker I was just turned off from reading it. The tone was just completely different than the happy, first-love feelings when the story starts.
| gomogomo777 chapter 10 . 9/8/2013
That was a beautiful story. You are just so good at writing!
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/3/2013
| Dahasmaga chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
One huge, huge thing you really really need to know. Bows can easily have more than 100lbs of force behind them when you let go of the string. If you are firing the arrow all the force goes on firing the arrow, but if you don't have the arrow then all the force goes into the arm holding the bow. It would be like having your hand hit properly with a sledgehammer. At which point your arm is horribly broken.
So, Link just got Zelda's arm horribly broken. Nicely done Hero.
| Greatazuredragon chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Poor Link " do not ask for whom the bells toll for they toll for thy". Good story this start is really promissing.
| LoveMadness chapter 10 . 4/18/2013
OH GOSH! Why I haven't found this earlier? I loved it! You did a great job with this!
| dragoniall chapter 10 . 4/17/2013
I love it! It's so perfectly written.. though I did notice some typos in every chapter