Reviews for Black Ascension
Alex Romanoff chapter 3 . 9/25
well shit
a.vago chapter 5 . 8/10
How should We play this RPG?
Rename character: Harry is ... boring.
Review inventory, review stats, review tech-tree, direction to Mt. Doom...
muffdyvr chapter 15 . 8/1
how can a female deserve being raped?
Guest chapter 7 . 7/18
This is pretty gruesome. I'm having trouble stomaching some of your descriptions of DE attacks.
AsherSalazar-Malfoy chapter 10 . 6/2
This is almost reminding me of the Warriors book series-
AsherSalazar-Malfoy chapter 7 . 6/2
adios bella-
AsherSalazar-Malfoy chapter 4 . 6/2
spoopy
Alex chapter 6 . 5/13
The order of the roasted chicken. If you look that up (and like chicken) your mouth will water.
Traveler301 chapter 4 . 5/8
Yeah, I like it. I can't wait for Dumb ass Dumbledork to try to control Harry. Should be fun.
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Jestersky98 chapter 12 . 4/29
So is this story ever gonna go anywhere or will he continue be a useless little bitch with massive potential but absolutely no skill whatsoever?
Raven Evans-Black chapter 1 . 4/7
Is this fic abandoned
muffdyvr chapter 19 . 3/13
this fic is a shit show. plot's all over the place.
and your harry is a weak little shit.. all bark no bite..
oh.. why in the hell is Order still useing Grimauld place when it's a Black property? the moment he became a black, the Order should've been kicked out automatically. real shit show this is!
Guest chapter 19 . 2/15
Update?
M chapter 13 . 1/25
Not goig to lie i thought he was going to change snape into a woman and use him for what he originally intended for bellatrix
narakunohime chapter 19 . 11/13/2019
Continue please
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