Reviews for Black Ascension
guy3 chapter 19 . 8/18
why arent there more chapters?
RavenWolf9212 chapter 19 . 6/1
Please update so I started this today and I was not able to stop till I was done so, Please update soon thanks for the good read!
Kirito Luciferum chapter 19 . 5/26
Plz update
Guest chapter 9 . 5/2
Good story. Only pet peeve is the long A/N. Hate when s story gets good reviews the authors feels the need to list every person names and talk on so that it takes up half the story
HokusKaeru49 chapter 19 . 4/25
Oh man have you abandoned it? Please please say no
TakemyKryptonite chapter 6 . 4/10
A masterclass in immaturity.
Guest chapter 19 . 4/2
Choosy chapter 1 . 3/23
this guy taken your work was on here but now moved /users/ggb7ge/werewolfpotter12
Crescent Glaive chapter 14 . 3/17
Wonder why there's a bold lettered section about 3/5 part way in the chapter. It lasts for about a dozen paragrahps...
WitchDavid chapter 19 . 3/10
Ok. Loved it. Was awesome from the beginning to now.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/22/2018
If the start was bad this time it goes beyond stupidity he'll yeah Lili was a good for nothing moron and James a wimp so purely stupid story
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2018
Bad start nothing better be expected the same moronic and weak Harry Potter as Canon
mumphie chapter 19 . 10/27/2018
ch. 19 - More than TWELVE YEARS have gone by since you posted. It is a shame - AND at such and ending of the chapter! This story has had quite an intriguing storyline. I wish you could dig behind the cushions, or look behind the drapes for your muse. I'm sure "real" life took precedence over this fictional one, but...I really wish you could have finished it. I was wondering if Harry/Seraph would get any Potter magical inheritance on his birthday since he already had his Black inheritance. I want to know more of what will be said at the end of the will reading. There is sooo much more that needs to be said in this. Sigh
mumphie chapter 17 . 10/27/2018
ch. 17 - still interesting

oh, and a long time grammar issue:
Carla, your back...(I thought something was on her back) - it should be you're back.
mumphie chapter 15 . 10/26/2018
ch. 15 - Enjoying your story - hope you can keep it going. -

you're - you are
your - you possess something
then - he went left, then he went to the right
than - being a grimm animagus is better than being a beetle
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