Reviews for Black Ascension
Zurver chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
I like your plot, but I can’t help to notice how cringey this fic is. The dialogues, you exaggerate the way how the characters speak too much.
Kahj Vewdaida chapter 19 . 10/30/2019
Please update. I LOVED where this story was going. It gave me many ideas for stories of my own as well.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/26/2019
Pleeeeeeeeease continue it this story is the best!
guy3 chapter 19 . 8/18/2019
why arent there more chapters?
RavenWolf9212 chapter 19 . 6/1/2019
Please update so I started this today and I was not able to stop till I was done so, Please update soon thanks for the good read!
Kirito Luciferum chapter 19 . 5/26/2019
Plz update
Guest chapter 9 . 5/2/2019
Good story. Only pet peeve is the long A/N. Hate when s story gets good reviews the authors feels the need to list every person names and talk on so that it takes up half the story
HokusKaeru49 chapter 19 . 4/25/2019
Oh man have you abandoned it? Please please say no
TakemyKryptonite chapter 6 . 4/10/2019
A masterclass in immaturity.
Guest chapter 19 . 4/2/2019
Choosy chapter 1 . 3/23/2019
this guy taken your work was on here but now moved /users/ggb7ge/werewolfpotter12
Crescent Glaive chapter 14 . 3/17/2019
Wonder why there's a bold lettered section about 3/5 part way in the chapter. It lasts for about a dozen paragrahps...
WitchDavid chapter 19 . 3/10/2019
Ok. Loved it. Was awesome from the beginning to now.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/22/2018
If the start was bad this time it goes beyond stupidity he'll yeah Lili was a good for nothing moron and James a wimp so purely stupid story
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2018
Bad start nothing better be expected the same moronic and weak Harry Potter as Canon
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