Reviews for Not Beautiful
AkioKuro chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Wow, this was amazing
me chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
finally someone who addresses that sasori is a puppet! D:

you did this really well, 3 i really like this story. i'd fav it if i could
dontneedanymoreuse chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
wow i realy like this story it's kawaii yet hot :3 hehehe

deisaso is cute
abstractGAMER chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
Ah! -throws a vegetable, but misses-

Well, there wasn't anything to complain about. I thought it was lovely, if somewhat chilling.

Deidara's absolute denial was amusing too, and your description of Sasori was perfect. He sounded almost childlike at the end ('Aren't I just a beautiful toy, Deidara-san?'), which was slightly creepy.

I loved it, though. You rock.

Keep writing,

Lyla x~x

And, yes, school sucks. Majorly.
LifeinClover chapter 1 . 2/11/2008

That's cute.
SmartieDroplets chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
It was really great!
xJasmine chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
O So cute! The lemon scene was awesome ) Simple but to the point. I like that D
Steely-Toast chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
Omg. I've read this like... 575937092 times. Anytime I need my uke!Puppet-Sasori fix. Which is a lot.

Omg, there needs to be more DeiSaso like this. Seriously. This is so well written... I just love it. More please?
Metallover130 chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Deidara and of my favorite pairings.

What i particularly liked here was hoe you kept it hot while no tmaking it too smutty. And i love Deidara's mental debates while the story is going on. Topnotch!
tencentimeterdays chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
I absolutly love this couple, and you do it good, heh this reminds me of a doujnishi I read where Sasori throws his head at Deidara (before he knows Sasori's a puppet)
cherrysmex23 chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
I absolutely love this story. It is beautifully written. I love it.
Grey Fox chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
He is a beatiful toy story!_
ManiacKiller chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
Cute :D
Gin's lil kitsune chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Wow.I liked it,I saw the story in my up the great work.
crazy yaoi fangirl chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I thought it was a cute fic even though I think that Deidara is more of an uke...I still liked it though!
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