|Reviews for Eye Opening Egyptians|
| eac chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
not an overly good chapter.
too fast in most places and the re/actions were either shallow, overly dramatic, or just plain 2 dimensional.
and what's with all this "child" stuff. it's irritating and certainly not the way methos would ever address anybody seriously.
also he is not macleaod. i doubt he'd be overly disturbed by her bathing in the blood of somebody that raped her.
and then he just kinda tosses out the byron raped samantha, not a few paragraphs after he told joe he wouldn't divulge anything about her?
at least put a bit more thought into your writing.