Reviews for Saving Angel
Mz. Daydream chapter 4 . 11/8/2005

I just remembered i only read p to chapter 3..the last one you sent me! AWW!

But on to the review..what the heck is up with her step dad? I just wanna punch him and call Andros for back up! Haha :P Who in the world is Tawny? I'm so confused..or maybe i'm supposed to be because i'll find out later? that was confusing..whatever

Haha :P Poor Ashley..just tell Andros! She can't go through this alone! Ah! That would be torture like crazy...anyway..LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

Update soon!

And i hope the writing gods will clear that writer's block of yours!

Lots of Love,

Mz. Day ;P
Ashley Hammond Astro Yellow chapter 4 . 11/8/2005
Okay, so here I go writing my review while playing minesweeper with a friend (I'm winning) and waiting for Jenny to finally show...

Maybe she's dead? If she is we can put up that Christmas Special a year early... and you'd have to take over her beta-reading duties... I'll miss her!

Sorry, I wasn't on! But I really needed my sleep! I got that test to study for! I gotta pass, I just gotta! Else I have to come back in the evening to retry! So...

What ya been up to? Me mainly being bored... Trying to study... It's actually working though... Listening to music... Singing along with the music and getting destracted from studying... Yeah, that's basically my day... :P

Still winning the game... Still no Jenny... *cries*

One more mine and I've won! Yay! Now if only she picks the wrong square... :P She did! Yay! I won!

So, did I actually talk about the story yet? I don't think I did... You know I love the chapter, right? You have to write more! I'll see what I can do for the Zodiac Rangers during my studiebreaks. I know what I wanna put in there, just need to get to the point for the point I'm at. :P

Is this review long enough yet?





Obviously not. I just won another game... and Jenny's still not on... *cries harder* She'd better have the how to get of the planet email close to the phone. :P Or she could go to Mel and phone from there, they can pay it. :P

So um, what can I still babble about? Nothing really... Hey, if you stay on until 11 tomorrow, I should be there not too long after, promise! By then the whole house should be empty so no one can complain about me getting too little sleep. :P

Wait, no... my mom doesn't have to be that early at school tomorrow... Well, I'll be there anyway. I hate studying! I so hate it! But I gotta pass that test!

Um... I'm done babbling now. I think I've made it up to you for not reviewing the other chapter, which I did this afternoon!

Hope to see you tomorrow!

Write lots soon!


Ashley Hammond Astro Yellow chapter 3 . 11/8/2005
Okay, so I forgot to review this one. Sorry, but everyone kept hogging the computer. I kinda gotta study for a test I got on Friday (thank god I only have two tests this week and no school beside that. already did the first test, so I can focuse on that other one completely) so I'll review the ohter chapter tonight when I claim the computer again.

Loved this one lots, as you probably know already for months. :P

Write more soon!


Chylea3784 chapter 4 . 11/8/2005
I look forward to your next chapter.
mel chapter 3 . 11/7/2005
*stares at chapter* then looks at Green Day poster. *stares at chapter again* *sneezes then gets ready to make a review* wow...*HUGS* THIS STORY IS SO FREAKIN AWESOME *gives the nobel prize award* and yeah thats just about it to say. shiz i have 2 hours to start my homework before i go to bed. i have a whole unit notebook due tomorrow for history adn its almost the end of the quarter to reach my grade to an A. aaww man i forgot about raising grade for math...yeah *starts studying* update soon
liz chapter 3 . 11/7/2005
Another great chapter. I'm glued to the story, I'm dying to find out what ashely's hiding. way to keep the suspense building.
Ashley Hammond Astro Yellow chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
Okay, so... I love this chapter, but you already know that, since I already read this months ago... Okay, maybe not months, but ages, that's for sure. Or was it months? I don't know any more, it's been so long...

Anyway... um... I kinda had fun at that birthday party, but I still didn't want to go...

You know... I just remembered... YOU DIDN'T REMIND ME ABOUT THE PHOTO QUESTION! IT'S REALLY IMPORTANT! Or at least, me and Jenny seem to think so.

Really, really thanks for the help with Ray's present. I love it! Now you can soon help me how to discribe it. HAHA! Your brains need to be fried too! Else the picture question isn't really that intersting anymore. :P

Okay, I think I've rambled enough for now...


jenny chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
since when do you get the second chapter e-mail notie before the actual story notice? :P anyway, just had to say that! but i can't review now... gotta go soon... :( well, actually, i might just review if i wasn't so happy at being such a wonderful reviewer that i had to live up to my expectatiions and blah blah blah! :) anyway, i'll review long later... if i remember... :( and actually i didn't really read that much, mostly skimmed, and WICKEDISSOTOTALLYAWESOME! :) i'll read and review more later! yay! yippie-yi-kiy-yay you came out with a new story! and i've already read it! but i didn't get to beta-read it! wow! that's something new! but who cares! update soon!
GreenDayfan1 chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
okies just putting it into favortes yes i know theres a different way but this one is easier so i dont have to go to places D and plus you get more reviews out of this
melissa chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
aaww im your saving angel? ] your mine too *COUGH*

*has deja vu* it seems like ive read it somewhere O lol im stuck in the past...woh *fixes all bad mistakes* i wonder if thatll change the future...and then good things will happen. yeah ok ill start reviewing now...

announcement:"AND ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER BY...GUESS WHO? ITS YOU" *hands a million dollar check* ok breakfast time...update soon! *puts in favorites*
Melissa chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
yeah *reads* sorry i didnt really umm reviewed your last story i missed a heck lot so your gunna have to summarize it for me one day ] i know why its rated M lol! anyways once again...aaw im an awesome frendd ] i feel jolly. jolly old saind nicholas...lalalalal its almost christmas time!

*checks email* weird...chapter 2 came before chapter 1 did...or did it? or im just crazy like that D oh well *go's on to chapter 2* *then puts it into favorites* ] update soon ill keep on task this time
liz chapter 2 . 11/6/2005
I loved these 2 chapters. such an interesting plot can't wait for the next update please post soon.

I have a feeling really bad things are happening to ashely by her stepfather.
Mz. Daydream chapter 2 . 11/6/2005

Sorry if i didn't review for the first chapter..but here's my make-up review! Haha :P

I love it! You go so into the story...i'm SO curious about Ashley's family, especially her

All I can say is: awesome, awesome, awesome!

I really love your writing style for A/A's great!

Update soon! ( And I still can't wait for Different Defenders! Haha :P Sorry..i just had to say it..)

Oh! I still have to send you the next part to my story..i kind need help! I'll ask Marieke and Jenny too..hmm..anyways!

Lots of Love!

Mz. Day
Ashley Hammond Astro Yellow chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Man, it's like taking a step back in history to where the Dinos still lived... I've seen chapters so far into this story... Oh well, it's still good and I'll never ever love it any less.

IT'S DEDICATED TO ME! YAY! Well, it had better be since I offered you the plot, those little details, the song and those other million little thingies. But I have to share with Jenny and Mel... :(

Wait... I don't mind, they're my friends! And so are you! Sharing with my friends is fun! I hate it if I can't share with my friends! Sometimes I really don't wanna share, but then I make sure they don't know I'm not. :P

I'll make you a songfic one day... Dedicated only to you... If you know a song that fits A/A, I'm sure I can come up with something for you...

Thanks again for helping me out with Jenny's birthday story! Taunt Jenny! She only read that part of the ending. :P

Okay, I think I'm kinda done rambling right now. I'll ramble on later when you put up other chapters...




Remind me to ask you something that involves a photo when I talk to you again.
jean chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
please update soon
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