Reviews for You give me heart palpitations |
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![]() ![]() Update! Update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it xoxox |
![]() ![]() ![]() rotflmao! Did Slughorn say orgy? Oh god! I almost had a heart attack when I read that... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi. i just finished rereading this fic, and it was just as good as when i first read it years ago. i reviewed obsessive lily disorder already, so you know my admiration for you and my hope that you'll one day come back to at least finish this. cliffhangers are something i can do without in my life, thanks. this is my favorite fic EVER, even if it is incomplete, and i have to say, your improvement as a writer from obsessive lily disorder to you give me heart palpitations is INCREDIBLE. you not only gave us readers a great background to a story we love dearly, we also saw you grow as a writer. and that's a really beautiful thing. you brought to us readers so much laughter and imagination, it's hard to express the amount of joy you've brought to many lives just by writing this fic. i hope one day i'd be fortunate enough to read short stories from you, even outside of the hp world. i really hope you make a career out of is, because there's no doubt how successful you will be. if you ever decide to become a novelist, dont hesitate to promote your work on your profile here on ffnet. your supporters, including myself, will purchase them without hesitation. :) i hope to hear from you one day! and i know this sounds a little creepy, but i really do admire your work, i'd be nice to know you havent forgotten ffnet completely in the present day. |
![]() ![]() Hey I love your fanfic writing :D it's absolutely hilarious and I've read it more tthan a few times now. But with the possibility of sounding like a rude reviewer this needs it's final chapter :( it's so so close that it's alright like this but needs the last bits tied off. I know it hasn't been updated in agers but wil ya? Pretty please? For all us fans D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Biggest. Cliffhanger. Ever. I know you've stopped writing this and I won't send angry letters about it being unjust. I will miss your witty remarks that I hear in the voice of Sirius. And I will miss Mooney's logical-ness. Heck, I'll even miss Pete's obsession with fuscia. I can EASILY say I love this story; and I am very emotional to know I can never see more of your writing. I will Author Alert you in hope that maybe someday you'll come back. Because you've got talent and... it's hard for me to let go of such an amazing story. I know sometime I'll forget this, it may be a month, or even a YEAR, but if I ever see a "[New Chapter] Chapter 22 of My heart..." in my inbox I would be so happy. I want to thank you for showing me wonderful pieces of the James/Lily romance I haven't looked at this closely. You have not showed me a story, you've showed me someone's life. A life of wonder and hilarity — and a life with fear and courage. I hope you know the impact of your writing on readers, because it is amazing. I can truly say you are amazing. And as of a fruitless hope this may be, I hope you keep writing. I never want to see you give up. One day, please, come back to the fandom. You will make all of us so happy. I'll be waiting, (I take that back... it sounded stalker-ish) Emily :) By the way, Snape is pretty creepy to me now... O.o SNAPECREEPY I love a good L/J, considering most of my friends are L/S. They make me GAG. GAG I TELL YOU! [Now THAT is a glimpse of my personality] My pinky has gone numb considering the cold air and lack of movement from my thumbs typing on my iPod's keypad so I think I have typed enough. ;) Again, thank you. YOUAWESOME _ _ _ • ELEOS • Author • Friend • Annoyance • |
![]() ![]() AMAZING! i've read 'Obsessive Lily Order' and this one and they are the best fanfics EVER! OMG, that was such a cliff-hanger :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is not good. Not one little bit. I know who the Half Blood Prince is. I know his secret too. Even though I find that secret very disturbing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say your fics are my absolute favourite, particularly Obsessive Lily Disorder and this one. You have the rare ability to actually make me laugh out loud at what I'm reading xD You have a different style of writing which I prefer because it's light hearted yet still just so amazing and the storyline pulls me in every time. I think after 4 years of waiting I have resigned myself to accept the fact that you will never update this amusing and still touching story, which you have left at the mightiest cliffhanger in all of the land. |
![]() ![]() I found the first story (obsesive lily disorder)really good. But this was even better. The story was amusing, and it had a plot, unlike many other stories. I read this in 2011 and when I checked when this story had last been updated it said 2007. So I really hope that you write another chapter, so at the least, not leaving readers on the edge, desperate to know what happens next o_O Advice: This story was really good, so to be honest there is not much I would change. However, sometimes I had difficulty understanding what was going on, though that might be because I am only 12...Good luck on writing another chapter! If you ever write your own material, try getting it published :) :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo! No nono! It can't end here! Okay, sorry. Hysterical gut reaction has been vented. Anyway, I really love this story. I love it so much. Considering that the last time you updated was 2007, I'm pretty sure you've lost the plot thread/time/enthusiasm or whatever- end result being ETERNAL CLIFFHANGER... but I had to tell you anyway about how awesome your work is. This story specifically, and Obsessive Lily Disorder especially (thank you, link from TV Tropes). Your characterizations of Sirius, Peter, Remus and James are insane fun to read, and Lily as well...but I lurve even more the fleshing out of Alice, Frank and other background characters. And may I take this opportunity to congratulate you on your awesome OC villain Derrick? He rocks. As far as well-written and such go, I mean. As a character, he prompts the intended reaction- "Merlin what an arsehole, hate hate hate, double hate." If you write no more fanfiction ever, at least finish this...some lonely day. I would be eternally grateful. (And also, mangoes my favorite fruit and likely future pregnancy craving. Not that I am in any position to become pregnant in the near future. We are talking distant future...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was evil. Pure evil! Anyway, this fic is hilarious and is now on my favourite list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() S-s-s-sorry but I know you were getting annoyed by the e-mails but it's been so long!... It's been years and the suspense is killing meeeeee :( Please update soon :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh God, this chapter made me LOL. I especially liked the bit at the end, so funny! Good job :) |
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