|Reviews for Falling Apart|
| Whirlwind421 chapter 3 . 4/29/2009
Great story! I liked the first chapter the best.
| The Watch Stander chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
| StargateJunkie chapter 3 . 8/17/2006
Good job! I really liked the friendship between Teyla & Rodney.
You know, I kinda/sorta like Ronon, but I decided to read the fic anyway, cause he's not a fav. character or anything, & I'm really glad I did! :) He is rather trigger-happy, isn't he?
| Tazmy chapter 3 . 4/11/2006
this was really very sweet.
| Shakia chapter 3 . 1/9/2006
You totally rock with writting Atlantis fics, I loved it! XP First chapter was my favorite, but I really liked the Teyla/Rodney friendship bonding too :D *adds to favorites* It rules :P
| Sickle Sword chapter 3 . 11/23/2005
That was really good! I searched long time for fics that have Teyla & Rodney friendship but from some bizzare reason I couldn't find any that were good. I'm glad that I now found your story. Really liked. Great job!
| LT chapter 3 . 11/22/2005
Loved the Teyla Rodney friendship that you had going. I'm glad they could make each other feel better about themselves.
| lauren hedgehog chapter 3 . 11/16/2005
aw... that was really cute - and now I like Teyla! She's normally rather underdeveloped and I've never been able to think of her as a person before. I think you did a wonderful job on the characters! It was just so aw :-)
| LittleKnux2008 chapter 3 . 11/13/2005
Wow. This was absolutely wonderful! Your characterizations of Rodney and Teyla are spot on and the writing is very powerful. :) I loved their interaction - only wish we could see more of it on the show - and I enjoyed the bits about Ronon. After seeing Elizabeth and John's thoughts of him, I was curious as to everyone else's. Anyway, this was a wonderful story and a job well done! :D
| MadCapSciFiWriter chapter 3 . 11/8/2005
You really did a great job of capturing how Rodney was feeling. He did look unsure when he tried to apologize to Shep at the end of 'Trinity' and I can see him worried about the ramifications of his actions. I REALLY loved how Teyla was a huge part of your story. You did justice to her character. Thanks.
| Chasing Liquor chapter 3 . 11/7/2005
I loved this - definitely one of my favorite Atlantis stories, perhaps topping that list. I loved your characterizations of Teyla and Rodney, and I don't think you have to worry about Rodney's slipping in this chapter.
Ya know, I definitely got the platonic vibe that I think you were going for, but the interaction did sort of evoke some thoughts about them in an unfriendshipy scenario. Think about it... and then write about it for me. :)
I jest. Anyway, great job.
| Cielito chapter 3 . 11/7/2005
I have to say, I loved this story..so sweet, mello and so full of emotion...You nailed Teyla's character to the dot, imo! and a side of Rodney that I wished we would see...I have to say, I never thought of Rodney and Teyla in this type of friendship, but after seeing them in the SiegeI and in Instinct and Conversion..I could certainly believe something like this...Great job!
| EclecticTrekker chapter 3 . 11/6/2005
WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW! I LOVE this story! You do both of these characters so well, and there aren't nearly enough friendship fics between these two. Thank you and please write more Atlantis!
| parisindy chapter 3 . 11/6/2005
very sweet and well done!
| fanficaddict chapter 3 . 11/6/2005
Bravo! :D That was great! Sad and sweet with just the right amount of sap :D Loved it!