Gloomy and amazing! Incredibly story!

Brava, my dear. I usually back out when I see it's a poem fic. But this wasn't a run of the mill poem. It reminded me of The Faerie Queene that I read in my college English lit class. It pulled me in and was very well done. I'm also reading your Fraternity right now, it is -excellent-.

That was... Just...Wow...I can't even...

...wow...

That was... I mean it's... I... I have no words right now... That was just amazing... You my friend have a gift

I cannot believe the skill with which you weaved such imagery, romance, forlorn, and fate together. You've proven with expert timing that Poe can be brought back to life. The poem's style is a stand out, my deepest Congratulations to an amazing authoress. Never did I think Erik's passion for Christine could be captured within a few stanzas of rhythm and rhyme, but Madame you have proved me wrong in every way. I sincerely hope you keep up your craft. You are a true inspiration to us all.

I'm not much one for poetry (I have little-to-no attention span, or interest) and usually avoid it on principle. However The Nacken's Song was recommended to me and I have to say I really, really liked it. I enjoyed the rhythmn and imagery you used, the adroit combination of both made it pleasurable to read. I liked the dark undertones imbued with an essence of Poe. I can't really remark on the mechanics of the poem because I don't know the first thing about poetry, but I can say that I don't mind poetry as much now - all thanks to you. Cheers for sharing this, its a magnificent piece of work.

I have no words. Physically and mentally speechless at the moment actually. Maybe once I can pick my jaw up from the floor I will be able to write a better review, but for now, this is all I have.

THAT WAS EPIC! Wow, you should be a poet!

Reminds me of a mix of (morbid lulz :P) Ogden Nash and the guy who wrote Alice in Wonderland.

Kya!

I'm actually very impressed here. I rarely like poetry, but this was extremely well done.

A masterpiece.

You should write poetry professionally.

That was, to put it simply, absolutely breath-taking! What are you doing writing fan fiction? You could be a best-selling poet! Your style is vaguely reminicent of Edgar Allen Poe, only so much better than that! His poems creep me out, personally, but this was unbelieveable. Adding to my favorites now...

awesome. I loved it, actually. Well done.

-Mlle. Morte

that was so sad...but I loved it. ]

Chilling.