Reviews for After Forever
Sifauna Auria chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
ooh..it's very interesting. please update soon, i wanna know who the mother of the child is. but i don't understand how naruto could forget about his..er..lover...
HinatasBiggestFanBoy chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
dun dun dun _
a.n.g.e.l chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
Oh...nice. I can't wait to read more of this.
Dana chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
i have wondered how this wholle ordeal came to pass.. i'm glad you're writing this.

i really loved this first chapter, looking forward to more!
Sheo Darren chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
I would only needlessly, endlessly repeat myself if I describe your works as "Stunning", "Moving", "Gripping", "Dramatic", and, most importantly, "Beautiful" et cetera, et cetera.

But since I seem to lack the capacity to transcend my own limited senses and humanity, I must fall back again and again on such words.

And so:

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

Nothing else to be said aside from the thought, the idea, the word.

Beautiful.
Attorney chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
SYAOWEE! SYAOWEE! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME? HOW IS THIS A NARUHINA IF HINATA IS DEAD!

GRAH...

*GOES BALLISTIC*

SYAOWE! [/CAPS-LOCK ABUSE]
Eli chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
... how could Naruto forget Hinata so easily? *sobs*
ice illuser chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
really, really, really, good! please update soon!
ShinobiFighter chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Wow, GOod story, really mysterious.

Update soon!
Valkyn Highwind chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Why do you torture us so by leaving us hanging like that? I'd like to see how the Rokudaime deals with the information that was imparted to him at the end of the chapter.
chibified kitsunes chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
sobz... why must you torment me even here? T.T

haha sigh... poor hina-chan... i like the idea of a side story/prequel to the nanny one... but this one's so sad... T.T

i know its either love it or hate it... but somehow i can't make up my mind...

but it's a great start, so keep up the great work. )

*goes off to a corner and mourns this naruhina tragedy*

(just ignore me. P)
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