|Reviews for Stephan the Story of a Juicer|
| Anon chapter 2 . 9/13
I like this, Juicers had some cool material and you seem to have a good grasp of it. Careful or Stephan might just run into, or start being called, Julian The First. Then who knows what sort of trouble this juicer group might get into. Happy gaming if it applies by the way.
| speedy petey chapter 2 . 3/13/2007
Great Story! Can't Wait For The Update.
| Kilgore Sometimes chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Very good! I thought the dialog and actions of the characters rang true. Can't wait for chapter 3!
| Warwolf03 chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Good premise, if a bit short. Some of the dialogue was a bit cliche and the vocabulary was a little too large for so-called "street urchins". I would also think that Stephan would have a bit more of an emotional reaction than what you portrayed. As you wrote it, it seems a little "dead". Anyway, with a little more thought and detail this could be a rather poignant story.