Reviews for Harry Potter, the ArchMagus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know you abandoned the story and will likely never even see my comment, but I very much dislike the decision to have Hermione so easily learn advanced, wandless magic within minutes. The whole damn point of the story is that Harry is special. Inordinately powerful and gifted. But this? It makes it so the only thing seperating him from the masses is that he “willed things to happen” which literally anyone can do if they are just told how. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good so far 2023. Are you still alive ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, this story's dead. Hopefully, the author is fine and well I really love what you've been able to do with this story. It's one of my inspirations for a Doctor Strange x Harry Potter crossover fanfic I have in mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait to see the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sadly it seems like IT IS DEAD. Are YOU at least still alive? |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the reference to flame and void from wheel of time |
![]() ![]() ![]() So you said "don't give up hope" and "this story isn't dead" and that you had a more complete chapter in the works but I think, however disappointing it is to admit, that this story after like 14 years is well and truely abandoned. Not to be callous but wtf bro. You couldn't even put a short message to confirm you've given up... Just a MASSIVE waste of potential |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, that bullshit Spiderman saying. Well we know this Harry is gonna be pathetic now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sucks this story died its very good and enjoyed what little there is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is dead unfortunately. Really good read in the meantime tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry taught Hermione nonverbal disillusionment charm in 30 seconds on the Hogwarts express as a first year. Ugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally, I always figured magician suited them best. Wizard as the most learned scholars. For either sex. Because “wizard” means “wise man” and I’m fairly certain the Wizarding World and wisdom are unacquainted with one another. Warlock or Witch would make most sense for Dark magicians (d-d-d-d-duel!). Since witches actually were usually men and wasn’t about magic but about consorting with demons/evil powers. And warlock is basically another word for witch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start. Hope you find your way back to this at some point, it has some nice elements. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not dead, the author said. 13 years ago. Like the story, has interesting ideas behind it. Wondering if he will branch out in to other things like magic from other races and worlds. Don't think I will ever find out though lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want you to know, I’m still holding out hope, I love stories like these! I realize that the likelihood of you continuing this story is slim to none, I thought I’d at least say it :) |