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Emma chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Okay so now I can say I have read all your fan fictions on Nagle and I love them all so much
I know you said you where out of ideas but maybe you could just try and write one more, I'm not very good at this but I've just come as with a couple of little idea I can think of right now that might give you a little inspiration or something like that
He could fall in love with the captains daughter
He could make friends with a new person on board who turns out to be a woman and the he falls madly in love with her
He could cheat on his wife to get back at her for cheating on him
He could try and take their baby because his wife isn't a fit mother
He could be befriend a upper class officer
He could make an enemy and then they could steal something from the captain and make it look like it was Nagle

Okay i know theses are really bad ideas cause I just come up with them literally as I am writing them I just thought maybe you could use the for something I dunno
wpialr chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
That really must have sucked for the guy who got shoot. Of course it had to be at the end after he went through everything. A really good passage. Keep it up.
hobbit1400 chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
TEARCRYSOB! I luff Negle! Do you know he is going to be in another movie? Blood and Chocolate a werewolf movie... love the book... Bryan Dick (aka Negle) is playing the bad guy... Hehe...

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