Reviews for A Long Bus Ride With My Brother
pinkperson chapter 10 . 12/29/2011
That was really funny :) One of the better Ayame /Yuki bonding stories I've read. Hatori going crazy and cursing ( and catching fire) and Tohru cooking Stouffer's made me laugh _
pinkperson chapter 8 . 12/29/2011
hahaha. Shigure's fake concern for Yuki's life made me laugh :)
pinkperson chapter 4 . 12/29/2011
This is actually pretty good story-wise, and funny. You should proofread your work for misspellings/typos, though.
Pheonix09 chapter 10 . 12/28/2009
the whole thing was hilarious and cute, you should make another story of Ayame/Yuki.
FallenHope-Angel chapter 10 . 6/7/2009
that was so funny especially the arson! thanks for the laugh and allowing this story to be posted.
loretta537 chapter 10 . 9/25/2007
this is good, strange but good.
TormentingAllLemmings chapter 10 . 5/18/2006
I still think it's funny. The gradma thing was...interesting. (grins) Hey, gimme a ring sometime, C2!

TAL
TormentingAllLemmings chapter 9 . 2/26/2006
Umm...very bizzare. I can't think of anything else.
hidden flames chapter 9 . 2/25/2006
Haha...

that was great, alda...aya-neechan...

Poor Hatori...*laffs*

Deci-
hidden flames chapter 8 . 2/25/2006
Yay! Shigure has a leather car! (so do i...)

Ah...you wrote this before the midterms...*nods*

Brave soul...*nods*

'K, I'm done with that...
hidden flames chapter 7 . 2/25/2006
It was Shigure!

Um...I think...

Actually, I have no idea, because after being a lousy friend and not reading your stories for...what? A month? I haven't gone back and re-read everything, so I don't know what I was saying...

Muhahahaha...wonder how Yuki's gonna react to this...
littlefiction chapter 9 . 2/24/2006
Poor Aaya.
PurpleAjah chapter 9 . 2/24/2006
Hatori is slowly going insane. All Ayame's fault. And his discusting tea. Good job, Aya! (Um, I meant you, not Ayame... this is confusing)
Winter's Light chapter 9 . 2/24/2006
Ha-ha! I love this! But Hatori is kinda out of character... 0_o

Keep on writing!
KeeperOfLostHope chapter 8 . 1/25/2006
Update soon! I must know what happens!
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