Reviews for The Longest Moment of My Life
Prairie24 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
What a great story! I love how you portray the Liv/El relationship.
BrittanyLS chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
I wish this scene had happened. I wondered where Olivia was when Elliot got shot!
Serenity Blossom chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
Very sweet.
Writerbitch92 chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
aww that was cute
SerenaFelicity chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
aww that was really sad but good.
igaveattheoffice chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
This is very well written and the emotion is portrayed very strongly, but in all frankness i think the hospital scene is a little overdramatic, considering Elliot was only shot in the arm.

I also think that Olivia, a trained and experienced cop, would not start screaming in the middle of a shootout, even when seeing her partner go down. She's got too much sense for that.

I admire your style, though. You use a stong conveyance of emotion to tell your story, and your grammar and spelling are near perfect (a rarity on this site anymore). Would like to see more from you!