I always help you out! Man did you change that alot! I didn't get the part in the cuboard how did Jason get there! Anyway upadate soon and if you need me you know where I am!

Great! The Person that made the last chapter must be really cool *wink* *wink* lol! Update son! :P

Hmm. Wavering acceptance of your AU. Seems good.

One or two tiny problems though. This 'theory' we have of the Doctor stealing the TARDIS? Not a theory. It's canon.

And you said about the Van Statten thing not having happened yet - that's in relative time to the Doctor and Rose, not to Miriam. By her time, it's way past 2012, so whether or not the Doctor's been there yet is irrelevant - the fact that he will in the future means that by Miriam's time it is already part of the past.

Yeah... Temporal stuff is weird and can be confusing.

Anyhow, although there's good writing, I feel it's a big rushed. Finding it hard to follow cos you keep jumping about.

Good descriptions and stuff though. Talking plants :o) Reminds me of Alice in Wonderland.

I'd go back and tidy it up a bit, but keep going with it if you have a storyline planned out.

Very good

Library? On the TARDIS? Cool! Way Cool! Can I go visit?Please?

Get Rose on the scene and UPDATE!

sounds good

are you going to time it along with when he picks up and rose and all that?

or just go along with your own thing, that's cool, it's really good

awaiting the next

Good

Make your chapters longer! Please! I'm begging you! And update.

I say write Mariam into the Role of Rose in Dalek

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! IM THE ELEVENTH DOCTOR!

PEEKABOO! I SEE THE DESCRIPTION

too interesting

interesting

No, I think reapers are out. Too complicated. Cybermen somewhere in the past, maybe? And more story please. Your chapters are way too short. More, more!