|Reviews for Star Ocean III: Crown of the Wicked|
| rbear1231 chapter 8 . 1/9/2014
u should come back to this.
| BlueTrillium chapter 8 . 3/1/2006
Dun-dun-duunn! Yep, that did clear up some stuff. And...I'm thinking they may come to regret having brushed aside Sophia's question so quickly. Though really, I suppose there was nothing they could do to answer it right now anyway. :) Foreshadowing, maybe...
Matter Displacement...yeah, that seems like a logical extension of Maria's powers...her gene is Alteration, after all. Hmm...I wonder if...no, it's too early to guess that far ahead.
See ya next chapter! :)
| Fou-Ryu chapter 8 . 2/22/2006
Wow... I've been searching for good Star Ocean 3 Fanfics lately... And its a real pain to find good ones... cause for some Reason many Peaple like writing Gay-Fics (Albel X Fayt) ...
Its real scary...
Anyway, I already contacted the Maker of "Vanishing Point", another good SO3 Fanfic... and actually I didnt believe to come across another one that could come close to the Quality of VP ...
But you really made up my day! The Fic is GREAT!
Please Keep It up... :-)
Im 100%ly going to check daily for any Updates on the Fic... _
| Chase chapter 8 . 2/19/2006
Very good story. Keep it coming! _
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 2 . 2/16/2006
update really really soon!
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 3 . 2/16/2006
Love this chapter!
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 4 . 2/16/2006
I really like your story keep updating
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 5 . 2/16/2006
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 6 . 2/16/2006
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
I love this story, please update asap!
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 7 . 2/16/2006
I love this story update please!
| Chaotic Symphony chapter 8 . 2/16/2006
This story is so awesome YOU SHOULD HAVE A BUTT LOAD OF MORE REVIEWS! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
| Blue Persuasion chapter 8 . 2/15/2006
Yeah, now it makes sense. Adoptive son…hope he’s not another one being ‘manipulated’… though it would be interesting. Keep going - it’s getting into it. Only advice I can give is to start a new paragraph when someone else talks – that’s all. I like this story! :D
| BlueTrillium chapter 7 . 2/14/2006
Whoa! I figured Akasken was related to Albel, but...his son?
I'm kind of confused about the timeline, though... Let's see...I'm assuming from the story summary that this is about 2 years post-game, so Albel would be...26-ish, depending on how much time was considered to have passed 'during' the game events. From the story context I would have expected Akasken to be in at least his mid-teens...which would mean, Albel had a kid when he was 10? That doesn't seem right...maybe I've mistaken Akasken's age, or how long this is post-game. Maybe that's something you could clear up for the readers? Or not, it's up to you. I'm sure it'll become clear eventually.
And of course then there's the question of who was Akasken's mother... ;) Hmm...gray eyes...
At least Nel's name is (partially) cleared to them now! The question now becomes, how can they 'cure' her...And I'm still wondering if there might not be other people taken over by Romero hiding, biding their time elsewhere... Don't worry, those are rhetorical questions, so don't feel the need to answer them. _
| BlueTrillium chapter 6 . 2/14/2006
Aha! Yes, vindication! Nel was not herself. That nasty Romero...I wonder how he got to her.
And now I'm wondering whether Romero has taken over anyone else...I mean, clearly Nel was the one who tried to kill Albel. However, at least so far, we haven't heard of anyone else SEEING Nel killing the king, Elena, Woltar, or the boy. It seems they're assuming that since Nel attacked Albel, that Nel was also the one who killed the others. But if Romero has taken over other people as well...Akasken for a hypothetical example seems like he'd have access to just about anywhere...well, there could be 'sleeper agents' all over the place.
I was thinking they'd maybe have to take Albel back to the Diplo in order to heal him with their advanced technology, but Maria healing him is just as good! Though I wonder what exactly it is that she did... _
Sometimes I think too much... :)