|Reviews for Through the Ashes of Empires|
| JPElles chapter 34 . 4/19
I don't think Cloud is truly suicidal. I think he knows and remembers some stuff that happened before. That happened to Soldier wasn't Sephiroth's fault. Hojo was the true villian. And helping the ancients. Aeris's people will help him a lot I think.
| The Great One chapter 33 . 11/21/2016
Nooooooo! You have to tell me how it ends!
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/13/2016
Daaamn. I was so into this and it was so well written, but then...my paring was demolished *Cries* your a great writer though, just wish I had my cloti~
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
Lol unfortunately when I read fanfiction it's to satisfy a sick urge to see my favorite characters in a show or game come together. A sort of closure for my mental imaginings or fantasies. Still the craving is never satisfied so in essence there is no closure. Needless to say I was disappointed with your pairings of cloud and yuffie and Vincent and tifa because I was looking for a story where they are swapped (yuffentine/cloti). I suspect that many people dislike or refuse to read this story because of a similar reason. However this story is not only incredibly well written, but its also intriguing and exciting on so many levels. While I did stop reading at some point because I realized that this was not the type of fanfiction I was looking for, I loved your elaboration on aspects of the final fantasy 7 story that are not fully explored in the game. This is original and yet it makes sense and really ties into the game without being a total rehash on gaming material leaving a very original story. Well done! I would never leave a review for a story I didn't like.
| Shalifi chapter 33 . 1/30/2016
Love the moment between Yuffie and cloud here. Great story.
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/17/2016
I'm so happy you updated! This is one of my favorites to read.
| JPElles chapter 32 . 3/28/2014
Hopefully she's smart enough to give them something close but not necessarily what they want. It's complicated enough it shouldn't be to hard.
| JPElles chapter 30 . 12/2/2013
Getting very interesting. Setting things up in a very cool way. Getting rid of Jenova and possibly opening things up for space travel, and getting back in touch with traditional magics. Like Terra, and the others could use with the Magnacite in Final Fantasy 3/6.
| Bakaneko-chan11 chapter 29 . 11/6/2013
Good chapter! Definite thumbs up, and even better that it's a CloudxYuffie fic! Not enough of them in my opinion!
| JPElles chapter 29 . 10/12/2013
Curious what keeps happening in this odyssey your writing.
| guitarplayer chapter 28 . 9/1/2013
I'm tell in ya, this is definitely one of the best, if not the best fanfic I've ever read. The writing is simply spectacular and the story fits so well together as if it were planned to be part of the game itself. I only started reading this recently but I cannot wait for the next chapter and the eventual end of the story. Definitely worth reading twice. I might!
| JPElles chapter 28 . 8/27/2013
Sometimes when I see Reeve I get confused who he is. lol. Then I remember Cait Sith was a robot.
Nice chapter. Curious how things will go with Cloud here. The whole thing with Soldier was messed up. Everyone in it was only in it because Hojo messed with there DNA. At least that seems to be the case from Crisis Core with Genesis, Angreal, etc... And of course everyone in Soldier having the glowing eyes. Still Cloud according to Hojo was unique in his DNA or something I remember. Curious where you take things. Keep it up.
| Melody Lynn Kamiya chapter 28 . 8/26/2013
I really can't wait to see what is happening underground city!
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/16/2013
I hear the problem with the principal character thing. I think what you've done is fine though.
Cloud finding and helping the Cetra is very appropriate. The perfect way for Cloud to put not just put his troubled past behind him but pay tribute to the fallen like Aeris, Zack, Jesse, and all the other minor members of avalanche and people who died fighting Shinra as well.
| Melody Lynn Kamiya chapter 27 . 8/12/2013
I'm really liking where this is going