|Reviews for For Your Salvation|
| Dixie Darlin chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
I have to say, the fact that you did NOT write out the actual rape makes this more powerful. And ugh, Frollo is the creepiest villain ever...nasty. Poor Esmeralda :( you didn't do anything wrong sweetie.
| DarkPriestessOfHyrule chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
So few words yet so much said. Interesting. I must say that Frollo is the most creepy villain ever! Good work, I saw no errors and what else is wonderful is that everyone was one hundred percent IN character. No straying personalities here.
| Aguna chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
| Ragged Claws chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Beautifully written and very dark.
I loved it.
| Miss Savvy chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
| Cengjiheshi chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
I love the contrast between the characters, also the incident left so much space to imagine but not dry at all...0_0 short and snappy, nice job.
| Meganlovesjb chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
nice job !
| Rosetta Penn chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Clearly you haven't been to this site in a while, but I still just wanted you to know that I thought this was beautifully written.
| Quazie89 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Oh, that was so good. Out of all of the Disney villians, I think Frollo scared me the most when I was younger. Great job on this fic!
| Baby-Cellophane chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Frollo would do that, the perv.
I like the darkness here; it's very well-written.
| Clairful chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Oh wow, that was... oh wow! Really really... wow!
| jafarjasmineforever2005 chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Very well done, I've always been a sucker for heroine/villain action and this was very well written. Keep up the good work.
| Umino Akiko chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
You make me very scared. Poor, stupid, Esmeralda.
| Sassy Lil Scorpio chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
This was a great and well-written fic. I think you did a great job in touching upon HoND themes such as prejudice, religion (twisted and misinterpeted by those in positions of power), ignorance and hatred; it shows well in the dialogue between Frollo and Esmeralda. Frollo has a warped version of salvation, and I like how you let the reader assume what he's done to her, rather than show it in the narrative. I'm not against reading rape or forced sex, but sometimes just implying it can be just as powerful and disturbing. I love the details, they bring the story to life. Good work!
| HeylinWarrior666 chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
Hmm, not terribly intriguing, but not bad. You had some good points, and the tone was deliciously dark. Your writing style is decent, but could be more descriptive, and I don't think it really kicked in until the end. That part was pretty emotional for a fanfic. Good job.