|Reviews for keen|
| Prieda Solo chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
OK. this is my favourite of your poems. it doesn't quite fit in with my idea of Sev, and i've no idea whose saying it but the poem itself it so beautifully written.
The rhyming is great, and flows so naturally. Some of your other poems seem a bit stilted at times bt this one is really good.
All the lovely images you use 'He is the snowy mountain tops, he is the darkest shroud.' That is gorgeous.
| Leta McGotor chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
I love your poems, they remind me on the ones a friend of mine is writing. I hope there will be another of them soon.
| jynkyg chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
gosh that was extraordinary. i can believe you wrote that cause that was...extraordinary. so my vocabulary's limited - you had some spelling probs but who cares this was great