|Reviews for Distance Makes the Heart|
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/1
:D That was lovely. :D
| kiras70 chapter 20 . 3/1
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG PLEASE UPDATE SOON, IS FANTASTIC...
MORE, MORE, MORE!
Thanks for share, I like.
| ColdHeartedVixen chapter 20 . 2/17
Probably one of the best fanfics I've read in any fandoms. It's so disappointing that it's unfinished, and should be considered a crime with where it's been left. I mean really, get the readers hooked and then not update for 3 years. Tsk Tsk, Author. Oh well, nothing left to do, but wait and hope you'll update...
| Princess Lala chapter 20 . 1/2
Fudgefudgefudgefudgefudgefudge! You update ONE chapter after two years, and now it's 2014!
| kathryn chapter 20 . 12/28/2013
21 chapter eighteen
for a few months later willy wonka came to see charlie on his birthday that day and it was amazing to see him . charlie took wonkas hand and held him back to his rooms and decided
to make him stay in school forever but something hapened to charlie and wonka they begin
to have another kiss but this time its a chaste one and deepening the kiss inside their mouth
together wonka griped onto charlie and charlie took off wonkas velet coat and top hat while
kissing each other when wonka and charlie fell onto charlies bed and mark and amy called charlie but charlie was avoiding them he never said a word hes still kissing wonka at the moment but wonka said to charlie why are you avoiding mark and amy but charlie said I want you
not them I just want you thats it its the only way I can get away from them but wonka
was so relieved that he could have charlie back in his life again then wonka kissed him once more on his lips and charlie is doing the same thing on wonkas lips kissing each other like a wonderful couple they never stopped they kept on kissing each other at the same time and again and again they will kiss forever and forever in their hearts.
| samsophie22 chapter 20 . 11/20/2013
| LixxBizarre chapter 20 . 9/1/2013
4 years and no update...but we still hope D:
| kathryn chapter 5 . 8/27/2013
Charlie was in his room this morning unpacking his things at the Chocolate
Factory then willy wonka came in into his room and said shall we go out today
in the park in the Car and Charlie said yeah that will be great for us to do then
later they went out in the car and drove off to the park and stopped at the park
for a moment.
Mr wonka and Charlie was in the Car all this time when it became dark they began
to kiss for an hour but it was a chaste kiss Charlie was focused on wonkas lips and
wonka was doing the same thing they rose up to the air from their seats and undoing
their trousers wonka gripped onto charlies Clothes and Charlie had his hands touched
onto wonkas hair deepening the kiss from each other but wonka and Charlie never stopped
kissing each other their noses touched together and they begin to have sex this time.
| kathryn chapter 5 . 8/25/2013
Mr Wonka and Charlie were at the Chocolate room doing their new Candy as they
begin to go back to the inventing room again . Mr bucket wasnt there after all so
willy was going to steady charlie for one more round at the lake when they leaned forward
to each other their noses touched charlie was foucused on wonkas lips and wonka did the
same on Charlie then they kissed each other once again.
| Jessaa1975 chapter 20 . 7/30/2013
I read these 17 chapters in 2 days! I am surprised that you haven't continued the story yet! You certainly have the talent to be a great writer.
| Cameron Reese Slytherin chapter 20 . 5/1/2013
cliffhanger much? Omg I love this story. Please please continue
| cartoon chapter 5 . 1/27/2013
I don't want Charlie smoking. He is kind a good boy. If Wonka knows, he will disappointed.
| A Single Fragile Rose chapter 20 . 1/5/2013
Absolutely hooked on this story; I never even thought of Charlie being paired with Willy. I somehow stumbled onto this magnificent, engrossing, captivating fic and fell in love with this fandom/pairing! Thank to you, hun! I have a new love, right now and its your marvelous writing and my new favorite OTP couple...these two. Your story truly is amazing and hope to read more from you. Ja and good luck. Happy New years. :)
| SadisticSinner chapter 20 . 8/1/2012
I absolutely LOVE this story! Willy is just what I imagine him to be if he was in a relationship; shy and adorable! I really hope you'll continue this! Love it! Well done.
| Blessed24 7 chapter 20 . 7/10/2012
I've never read a Charlie and the Chocolate Factory fanfiction before. I'm glad this was my first one. I sat down to begin reading it a few hours ago and I haven't been able to stop! Spot-on characterization in addition to a beautiful (writer's) voice made this a joy to read. Thank you for posting this. *Walks away to read anything else you've ever written.*
P.S. I hope you finish this. I've been looking forward to Wonka visiting Charlie at school since the beginning of the story. Fingers crossed. :)