Reviews for The Best Part of Waking Up
blueeyedbeauty123 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Awwwww, I personally think it is lovely! Just so you know where I am it is 2:33 am.
intensewhatever chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
This was amazing! So sweet and perfect! :)
aqua512 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
aww! one of the really amazing oneshot that i've read in long time and that to about lily and James... definitely going to my fav. list...
MissEMT chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
very sweetly and sensitively written. good job :)
LifeintheShelleyBoat chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
RaeganBlack chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Definitely cute! I was expecting a lemon but this was better! "Best part of waking up...IS FOLGERS IN YOUR CUP!" lmao sorry i kinda had to! Good job!
TrueLoveIsHardToFind chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Amanda chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
aww that was really cute! thanks for writing .
amber chapter 1 . 7/13/2010

i don't have anything to critique your story. the concept is not original,this kind of a story has been written again and again for probably every book, anime, movie...basically any couple that exists...but, there's something about the way you wrote about this over repeated concept,,, it was almost...classic.

i'm sorry, i could not find a better way to express it, its professional. very few people can write in this style these days...usually, its just what they think, writing their thought, not very authorish, if you understand what i mean...

keep writing like this.

best of luck...
black16lily chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
that as so cute and sweet. great job!
Ozoh the Wise chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Very well written and poetic. I think it makes a great story when writers can use poetic words, line and phrases in their works, intentionally or not. It makes a good read. )
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
so cute! love it
thekeeperoftime chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Very nice!
Canterbury Fish chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Very nicely written. Lovely imagery and perfect example of writing about a carnal night without being vulgar. I think i've learnt a lot
evizyt chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
SO CUTE! hilarious! Operation flower... ahahaha oh my god, I was dying laughter. Peter's mantra of see no evil, oh I was practically crying, it was so funny! It was also an awesome story. Wow, so impresseive!
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