Reviews for Integra's 38th Birthday
dcoterol chapter 18 . 7/14
look I rarely write any reviews; in fact this might be my second or third. This is amazing, not gonna lie you should do some editing; however you have an amazing imagination and I simply congratulate you
Guest chapter 12 . 4/26/2015
There were a few times that Mouse called Alucard by his name I'm going to pretend that that was an accident because Mouse loves her father right?
Guest chapter 9 . 4/26/2015
Come on at least have him say he loves her
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
I Want to see some affectionate moments between Mouse and Alucard
FromSoraXWithLove chapter 27 . 11/26/2014
GAHHH, the drama and tension is too much!

My only issues are the occasional spelling an grammatical errors, most of which can be easily fixed by a few quick scans if you'd care to
FSXWL
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
It was awesome. I really enjoyed it. good job ! I also want to note , that what I really liked was how the ending had closure for alucard and integra and that it was a good, satisfying, happy ending .
Moontan chapter 26 . 11/20/2013
Hmmm. Quite, Biblical actually. Very much like Abraham and Isaac. That name, Abraham again. Seems to follow this story around quite a bit.
Moontan chapter 21 . 11/20/2013
Hmmmm. Very interesting bringing his brother back briefly. Seems as though you've done your homework.
Moontan chapter 4 . 11/20/2013
I have to say, I appreciate your use of Celine Dion's 'Seduces Me' for this chapter. The sort of notes and tone in the song well suited what you were writing. I've been a fan of that song for a long time.

There's a few places where your phrasing is a bit redundant, but that's something a beta can help you with.
light blue eyed dreamer chapter 27 . 10/20/2013
OMG and a monkey in a tug boat! I love your writing and this story 1000 A for you great work!
Guest chapter 26 . 8/26/2013
I didnt really like the ending... The whole story felt weird to me. I guess its just my belief that Alucard and Seras were meant to be vampires, never to be forgiven by God. Yeah the ending was just not suited for my tastes
Khai the Shipping Queen chapter 4 . 5/24/2008
hmm a song replacing equivilent if you ask me.i like so keep on writing.
Obsequious101 chapter 27 . 5/24/2008
Wow. Your story is so intense and exciting,its an amazing story! -applause- I wish i could write like you lol
Khai the Shipping Queen chapter 2 . 5/23/2008
hee hee hee a night of !
fireph03n1x chapter 27 . 5/1/2008
Hey

I liked this very much... are you by any chance making a sequel?

thanks

bye bye Rozanny (fireph03n1x)
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