|Reviews for And So It Is|
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/18
im such a bitch, i was hoping babs would get in a car crash and lose the baby or have a stress miscarriage lol
| arodreader chapter 20 . 1/18
Although this story is entertaining, it’s really hard to enjoy reading any of it when all of the characters are so unlikeable. I don’t usually mind when they are written a little OOC, but they are all such stupid and awful people that you really can’t root for anyone.
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/18/2020
Robin can really be a jerk sometimes
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2019
If anyone sees this and you liked the story can you explain why you like/think this is a good story and how old you are or when you last read a book? Even the sexual scenes were bad.
WHY?that was the question I had throughout the story. Why can't they be together? If they love each other then... is the only reason because Richard still wants to have sex with other girls? Then why not ask, as Starfire herself asks. you know two wives, one husband. There is no redeeming quality to Richards character AT ALL. Kori's character isn't written to be one we dislike, but there is also nothing there. Ok she loves him, she wants him, she lets herself be used... and that's all. In order for us to stop thinking Kori is just dumb and pitiful old her Barbs turns into a mean girl, like excuse me Barbs was the one being cheated on. There's no build-up for us to understand or convince us of why she should take him back or why she did. From the beginning, it's easy to guess she'll take him back no matter what, so a different outcome would have been a great surprise and improvement.
| ZombieBeavers chapter 1 . 4/26/2019
I’m sorry, no criticism towards the authors writing techniques or anything like that but good god. Wtf was that? Why does the main character continuously “take back” the guy for literally no reason? He rude, degrading, and useless. He’s a good fuck, that’s pretty much all he’s good for apparently but she could have great sex with almost any other male or female in this story. If there was an actual reason other than her “loving him” as to why she takes him back over and over, this would make a lot more sense. He literally has no reason not to be with her other than to further the “plot”. I’m sorry would have much preferred to see a less pathetic portrayal of any main character or least seen some type of growth throughout the story, where she gains some sense or realizes that’s she or at least her child is worth more than him. I mean give her at least one or more traits bitch and pathetic. I know this seems super harsh but please I beg of you add more dynamic characterization for your characters please
| Wow chapter 20 . 1/15/2019
This is like every bad trope rolled into one mega bad story. To be honest, I'm impressed. I did not think anyone could do that. A lot of young female readers like trope filled stories like this though, so it's not necessarily a bad thing. It's still a better love story than Twilight. I'm just disappointed there's no Mari Grayson.
| LoneStarGirl93 chapter 1 . 11/9/2018
Ooh I like this so far...
| animeaesthtic chapter 1 . 10/3/2018
I read this years ago when it was first published and now I’m 21 and STILL think about this damn story. I’m pathetic but the story is amazing.
| sfromteentitans1234 chapter 20 . 4/5/2018
This Story is so fucking good .
This fanfic should turn into a movie or something cuz this is my favorite fan fiction ever .
ROUND OF APPLAUSE
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/14/2017
I know you wrote this like over 10 years ago, but there are some things that I would like to say.
The plot is...good. I can see where you’re trying to get at and the idea has potential. The characters, however, are extremely OOC, and I think some people may have a hard time picturing this as a Robin/Starfire or Richard/Kori story.
Second, using phrases like “That’s retarded.” Is very offensive and inappropriate. When I saw that in the story, I instantly wanted to quit reading it.
And I think people are saying that Kori is a whore in this story is because of how easily she goes back to Richard each time even know he’s with someone else and also how she just slept with Xavier just because she could.
Again I know you wrote this a long time ago, and you probably won’t even see this review, but if you do, this is what I just wanted to say about it. All in all, the story is good.
| Honey chapter 19 . 9/14/2017
| Sheveen chapter 4 . 8/28/2017
Urrrgh, I just really want Kori to stand up for herself and stop falling for this douchebag's charm. She sees him having sex with his girlfriend and still wants him? I'd be so disgusted
| DrarryRobin chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
I always loved this xxxxxx
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/26/2017
easily one of the worst things i've ever read. gosh kori was pathetic in this story.
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/16/2016
its Calvin Klein not Calven Klein