Reviews for Revenge
BlackWriter09 chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
This story is interesting. I think it will be a good story, but as the other reviewers said, add more detail, make more dialouge, and make the characters more individual. I might not need to know who this character is, but I sure as hell know that the narrarator should be distinguished from everyone else.
Sorceress Cassandra180 chapter 2 . 11/13/2005
Nice beginning to your story!

However, like what DigitalFort3ss said, you need a bit more detail, and some dilouge.

But, all in all I like it so far, and I hope you'll continue.
DigitalFortr3ss chapter 2 . 11/12/2005
Nice idea for the story bro, but lets see a little more detail, give us some dialogue between the characters and explain more about the plan. Give a more detailed background. Bit more detail is really all you need.