|Reviews for Paintball|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11
Would've been good without the wapanese inserted into it.
| The Crystal Pen chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
TEWG: KYAH~ SO CUTE! YUKI'S SO ADORABLE!
801: *shoots Shuichi's arm*
*gets stabbed with fork*
TEWG & 801
| KirstenHope chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Lamo that was so funny!"Either that or it was Tohma breaking into their apartment again." i love this line! they r so cute~ :)
| The Meta chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
aw! way to cute!
| SakuraRi chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Aw! That was so cute!
| me.chan chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
| CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
May have been a random fic but it was a damn funny good one! I've noticed that often the most random of subject matters make some of the best fiction around and this is no exception possible because they are so easy to write. As for constructive criticsim I honestly can't find aything wrong with it other than your dividing things between scenes that at first i thought meant 'bad language bleeped out' (shrugs)
| Swirly chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
hehehe... Hmm, I've always wondered how Touma's able to break in. Good lockpicking skills? Or an extra key?
| jaks-phantom chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
well i thought that was really cute :D aww he was worried. I hope you write more for this couple soon. Its a fav
| Maria chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Wow! (i just noticed that my first word in every review is wow...wow) that was so funny! It was also sweet how Yuki got so worried! I LOVE this story! Thanks for makin my day! *dances*
| JESSICA chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
NICELY WRITTEN! HAHAHA WISH I COULD SEE YUKI'S FACE THOUGH
| where-my-heart-resides chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
oh, that was so cute! and sweet! i love you yuki! :) this made me REALLY happy. good job!
| DarkVixenOfLight chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
shuichis so cute lol
| Ketsi-aiita-n chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Ok, it was adorable. And funny. I've so stolen the Tohma breaking into their house quote. *goes to find more stories*
| Alana-kittychan chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Alana: Aw soo cute