|Reviews for The Basics|
| Dingy chapter 13 . 11/8/2006
No! Sasuke can't die ;O; Poor Sakura'd be so lonely -cries silently to herself- x3
Anyhow, awesome fanfic you have here! Keep up the good work! It's hard for me to find a modern time-like story and be able to keep my interest in it. You did a wonderful job here though. I can't wait till the next update, -cries silently once more- please update soon!
| KentuckyAngels chapter 13 . 11/7/2006
this is my favorite fan fic, please don't let it end like that!
| Annie Sparklecakes chapter 13 . 11/7/2006
Oh my God. That is the most evil of cliffies. I sincerely hope that you are typing out the last cchapter RIGHT THIS SECOND!
Um. Yea. Heh.
Anyways, this chapter was great. I completely adored the beginning, it was SO well-written.
I loved the scenes with Sasuke and Itachi. Man, he's such an evil little jerk. Hot, but... ARGH.
But what was on that paper Sakura gave Sasuke? It was maybe in an earlier chapter...? I'm too lazy to go check, though. XD
So yeah, awesome chpter, update soon (like, now would be good) AND as soon as you're done, bring out a new fic? K, thanks.
| Sanguine Dreams chapter 13 . 11/7/2006
Sasuke can't die. He and Sakura have to make babies! ;]
| pink22sakura chapter 13 . 11/6/2006
pink22sakura: ... ... ...
Naruto: Hoi. Hoi! Are you still alive? *shaking pink22sakura's shoulders*
pink22sakura: Uh... Aa...
Sakura: What's gotten into you?
Naruto: Huh? 'Yes'? What kind of an answer is that? Hello, snap out of it already! *slapping pink22sakura's face*
pink22sakura: Itai~... That hurts! *rubbing her cheek*
Sakura: So, you with us now?
pink22sakura: Gomen, It's just that I was too absorbed in reading the story.
Sakura: Well, Hinata-hime is waiting for you to say something you know.
pink22sakura: Ah, yes! Of course!
I really love this story! It's written well and it makes me want to read nonstop! This must be the best AU fanfic that I've ever read! Ooh, I'm dying to find out what happens next! *squeals*
Sasuke: That's all?
pink22sakura: Yepz! At least I left a review, right?
Please UPDATE SOON! :)
| Amaya-chan chapter 4 . 11/6/2006
This is very intriguing... I love a good mystery, especially when there's romance involved as well.
"Ryou's the crazy outgoing one"...lol. I could just imagine him thinking, 'Oh god...what have I gotten myself into?'
Back in chapter 3, I laughed when Sakura called Mrs. Uchiha "Mom"... but the part where she decides not to risk that "Dad" thing was even better! )
As for constructive critisism, I don't really have much to say. I thought that a few elements were unrealistic in the beginning.(For example, how she was simply taken away from school and her home without any notice... it was a little difficult to believe, even though it was a good reason. It's a lot of ground to cover.) Despite minor things like that, it was still very good. I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of the story!
| hellobaby chapter 13 . 11/5/2006
Are you aware of how evil you are...?
I can't elieve that this fic is coming to a close! It's soo good, too!
Will you make a sequil (yes, it's spelled wrong... -_-0)
| icygirl2 chapter 13 . 11/5/2006
what an amaeing story i have just discovered it and man i must say this is a masterpiece i just hope that sasuke will be alive i mean it's a logical thing to think . OTHERwise everything will be lost all of their efforts for nothing§ so to the next chapter and goodnight!
| chasingcolors chapter 13 . 11/5/2006
Ooh, delicous drama. Poor Sasuke got shot... YOU BETTER NOT KILL HIM OFF AUTHORESS! Update soon please!
| AGENT KELL chapter 13 . 11/5/2006
OH MY GOSH!
THIS IS SUCH A INTENSE CHAPPIE!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
*turns into chibi form...(think of a ... toddler eating ... icecream...?)
eyes turn watery and starts forming puppy eyes...
lips tremble... and form a pout*
okay.. hahah enough of the PUPPY EYE thing...
ps. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.
pss. UPDATE SOON okayys?
| Tana Shibara-san chapter 13 . 11/4/2006
No! Sasuke can't die! T,T No! I wana know what'll happen soon! Please update! T_T
| 2supersmart chapter 13 . 11/4/2006
ASSADKJSHFSFSDA -dies- DD sasuke cant die T_T i really liked this chapter with all the suspense and all but i definately CANT WAIT for the next chapter
| Chibified Moogle chapter 13 . 11/4/2006
Nu! Cliff hanger! xD Please update soon!
| Pale Moonlit Nightsky chapter 13 . 11/4/2006
Please update! Please please update!
| rainingblood666 chapter 13 . 11/4/2006
omg you can't let him die! NO that is not fair. I am going to be in shock nad I won't be able to sleep! wah