AWWWWW! This was good!
Thank you!
I liked this Jou and Seto time!
Thank you for this!

Thumbs up on the personality accuracies. Pretty nice, but I just couldn't see Anzu and Seto as being together. Walking, talking friendship speeches and a stoic blue eyed CEO just don't mix that well. How would the golden lab fit in? Write a little more, won't cha? Good job though xD

Love it!

Really good story. The character development was superb - I found I could really relate to them and that they were more than just names. You're a very descriptive writer but not too descriptive which gives the story a nice layer of substance. For a girl to be able to believably write about a father's abuse of a son shows that you are very creative and talented enough to be able to put your creativity in writing. There are only minor problems to attend to such as the usage of the correct "then/than", spelling, and sentence structure. Keep up the good work Padewan ~_

Wow that was an interesting way of getting them together! I enjoyed the story; just not the heartache. Thanks for writing this.

man that made me tear there

Loved it but I found a few grammar mistakes...

FOLLOWING QUOTES ARE FROM YOUR STORY (so i don't have to put quotation marks)

1. Deep inside all her really wanted to do was cry (should be he and comma after inside)

2. any of your friend’s houses she (should be friends'

There was another one but I can't find it anymore

GREAT STORY!

Oh god, Seto allergic? That never crossed my mind before! Nice story; very cute and nicely done! Perfect grammar and spelling and nice style!

You need to update on this soon cause I need it!

Poor Jou, por Mokuba, poor Kaiba!

oh I love this ficy please update and KILL ANZU!

This was good.

xD fwahaha...a dog-allergic Kaiba...how kawaii...

] nice fic, I've really enjoyed reading it

*there were about two spelling errors I came across _;; maybe you could read over the fic again and catch them? Hehe, your choice. Great job, though *

I ADORE IT!

That. Was. Amazing.

There are no other words for it. There was an almost intangible sense of melancholy that invaded the entire piece...it was beautiful without being cliched. Alot of the time the Seto-comforting-Jou thing can become sort of melodramatic and...well...silly. But you made it work so well...it was spectacular. You have so made my weekend!

So, incase you didn't quite understand what i was trying to say in that review, i thought it was good! Extremely good! Better than good. Fabulous!

Ok, well, i think that was more than enough gratitious praise for one night. Seriously though, if i weren't clinging pathetically to the last shreds of my dignity then i'd bow, or throw you a party or something.

*Throws confetti and leaves*