Reviews for The Tormented
Runawynd chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
So tragic, but so lovely! 3 The ending was sooo sad, though; poor Kei, he really tried! ;_; But I absolutely loved it, great work!
Jillian chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
*Sniff, sniff!* What a sad ending! You're right, Rei didn't even cared... THE LEAST SHE COULD DO IS PRETEND TO CARE! I was devastated when I saw black soot on the couch... Hope you continue making more stories! X3
Guardian795 chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
This was a very well written story of Kei's death. I didn't enjoy the game that much - it wasn't scary enough - and I was disappointed that Kei came so late in the game. I wanted him to have some development, etc. And yes, I hated that Rei didn't seem to care. Great job at this.
Sengoku chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
That. Was. AMAZING! Please make more!
Kusabi Makabe chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Very nice. :)

I felt sorry for the man, too. I wish they had explained what happened to Mio, though. Aargh! Well, maybe in the Good Ending. Or maybe I just didn't do an important sidequest.

Anyway, I thought it was good. Keep writing, even if it isn't this...